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color me beautiful
By BeautifullyRuined
You told me pain is art
and then you hurt me
in a million beautiful ways
my tears became the paint that
splashed across your canvas
heartache between every brush stroke
my reality became a series
of brilliant colors
clashing violently as if
fighting for there places beside
one another
you captured my dreams in
a mason jar so that
even when i`m not around
you can disect my mind
painting as if your sanity hangs
in the empty space between my
lips and your easel
and everytime i speak of not
wanting you
you take out your sketchbook
and show me how my eyes
contradict my words
I stare at how hauntingly
beautiful you made me
knowing no one else could capture
the tilt of my lips
or the dejected position
my shoulders find
theirselves in
I realize i could never leave you
because you turned me into art
even if you had to break me to do it
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© 2007 BeautifullyRuined
Comments on "color me beautiful"
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A former member wrote:
You... are a prism of beauty, unfathomable, a splay of colors that I cannot even comprehend. but this, not being able to leave... this I understand; too many times do we cling to that which hurts us.
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A former member wrote:
beautiful melancholy so cleverly conceived -this is a gem. I especially adored the last line -but loved of all it.
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On Friday, March 9, 2007, Tania
(197)
wrote:
I was hopelessly trying to write something along the same lines of this.. but im glad i didnt bother..it wouldnt have came close.. absolutely lovely and flawless.. and i love the way you have wrapped art into it.. son beau.
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A former member wrote:
Wow... this was beautiful. You truly are art, however broken you may be. The last first and last stanze open the poem flawlessly and end it heart wrenchingly beautiful. Great write
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A former member wrote:
very, very good. well done. ~ saddened.
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A former member wrote:
Holy fuck, what a great opening. This was awesome, I loved how you brought art into this. Well done
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, torn_beauty
(77) wrote:
pretty imagery.
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, blue
(1454) wrote:
ouch. ~b
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
its great.poetry at its finest!
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
I love this.
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, blue
(1454) wrote:
you love everything neener face
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
Snuggles wuggles...blue.
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A former member wrote:
wow..."because you turned me into art/even if you had to break me to do it" That line...and every other line within this piece...struck cords within my heart and set bells ringing loudly. Beautifully done. ~*Beth*~
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A former member wrote:
this is a piece of art in itself.lovely
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