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precious
By prettydisgrace
I wake up in the middle of red,
i see red all around me
its sparkle is amazing,im inside a ruby
im inside your heart
its not beating too fast
although i know your alive
its closing in on me
not sparkling anymore...
i can see your soul through this ruby
i can see your eyes of emerald
i can see your life like opal
and your dreams are too precious
talk to me...let me in
like i am in your heart of ruby right now
the one i have broken
but still deep within...forgive me, you are precious
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© 2007 prettydisgrace
Published on Wednesday, March 7, 2007.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Monday, April 23, 2007, carlosjackal
(3012)
wrote:
I really liked the imagination of this piece, and those last 2 lines closed the piece brilliantly, rounding the poem off most satisfyingly. -Carl
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On Tuesday, March 27, 2007, ANGELSLAYER
(118) wrote:
Great imagery.I liked this very much
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On Friday, March 23, 2007, Enigma
(91) wrote:
great writng I can picture it in my mind..
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A former member wrote:
you've painted a very lovely picture, thank you for sharing.
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
thanks mab,and thanks to everyone who enjoys
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A former member wrote:
your writing is a precious jewel.your imagery absolutely shines!
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
you are too cute! for somereason the first part made me think of what it is like inside of a grape :) thank you for the imagery
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
a grape? hehe!
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On Thursday, March 8, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
'im inside a ruby..im inside your heart' :) hmm intresting joey.. very good write. me liked it.
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A former member wrote:
definately a very dark write. i loved it. welcome , welcome to dp. ~ saddened.
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On Wednesday, March 7, 2007, D3ADT0WN
(186) wrote:
This is great.. I loved it. And since i didnt get the change to tell you before. Welcome to dp. Hope you stat :] ~Ezimo
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