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senses
By Winter Born
Hear: moaning, gasping
See: blushing skin quivering
Smell: her arousal
Taste: our juices on her wet kiss
Feel: her tight wet grip
*These are Tanka poems. My speciality. A five line version of the Haiku.
they are supposed to be this short.
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© 2007 deployed to hell
Published on Sunday, February 25, 2007.
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A former member wrote:
not really my thing, but cool nonetheless
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On Sunday, February 25, 2007, Tania
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wrote:
different. and different is good. great
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On Saturday, April 17, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(346) wrote:
great is better.best.Here I nest in goodness..Sensually tanked..Thanks.
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A former member wrote:
this is great. I don't see too much Haiku or Tanka at DP(maybe I'm not looking hard enough)refreshing!
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A former member wrote:
Interesting. I'll have to try writing one sometime. Well done.
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