she spoke emerald

By Six-Out

she spoke emerald



she spoke emerald to me
with a tongue like a diamond tip- ripping
metaphors on mistake. saying it's best to be loved.
with sage lips. speaking vindication.

and she was screaming mementos.
like stolen words and vodka. turning the shades of grey
green. like the sentences she'd turn to dust.
and it's easier to be alive than to live. I'd whisper.
as her olive world turned my heart into an ocean.

and I say that I'd cry for her- if she didn't do it herself.
a viridian princess. monster like in demeanor.
when I tell her that her tears are so jade.ed
she breaks me. with ink blotters and idle hands.

and I want to ask her- if it's hard counting the willows
that weep for the believers. with their copper fingers
seeping verdigris and violence.


I want to speak.
but she's still singing for redemption.

so I'll let it be. as she speaks- green

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© 2007 Jon Rodgers
Published on Saturday, February 24, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dancing_Monkey On Monday, March 26, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    I*m gona send you a mail :) wonderfull work on this write man

  • slow.burn.star On Monday, March 26, 2007, slow.burn.star (84)By person wrote:

    a watercolor of words. xxx

  • Arianna On Sunday, March 4, 2007, Arianna (105)By person wrote:

    beautiful jon...

  • Daughter_Of_The_Moon On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106)By person wrote:

    Your write's never cease to amaze me. They always leave me pondering, longing, or just satisfied. -Heather-

  • Mylissa On Monday, February 26, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    this was beautiful.

  • HisStormdancer On Monday, February 26, 2007, HisStormdancer (6)By person wrote:

    you constantly amaze me .. thank you.

  • blue On Sunday, February 25, 2007, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    shut up

  • Six-Out On Sunday, February 25, 2007, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    why?

  • blue On Monday, February 26, 2007, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    I dont know. why not?

  • Six-Out On Monday, February 26, 2007, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    because i like not shutting up. silly.

  • blue On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    humour me bitchlips. i'll do all those nasty things you like.

  • Six-Out On Thursday, March 1, 2007, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    i love when you talk dirty to me.

  • Tania On Sunday, February 25, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    this was phenomenal. yes incredible.she spoke emerald..

  • PoeticHellion On Sunday, February 25, 2007, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    That was amazing.

  • A former member wrote: This is my first time reading your work.Your propensity to tell this tragic tale is amazing!This was a delight to read

  • verablue On Saturday, February 24, 2007, verablue (111)By person wrote:

    i'm very much enjoying this "she spoke..." series of yours...they just get better every time. "and she was screaming mementos. like stolen words and vodka. turning the shades of grey" this whole stanza was just incredible!

  • sIo On Saturday, February 24, 2007, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    when will she speak nothing?

  • A former member wrote: "It's easier to be alive than to live," that's for sure. Loved this.

  • A former member wrote: i really liked this. brilliant. ~ red.


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