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when all is right, i will die
By GraveFlower
when i take my dieing breath
is when all is going well
when all of my words remain spoken
and im not living through this hell
when all of my hatred comes to an end
is when all of my lifes time has been spent
when everyone in the world has become my friend
all of my problems have seemed to went
i wont have to decide if i want my next breath
when i finally love my life
is when i come to
my death
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© 2007 masked_from_hate
Published on Friday, February 23, 2007.
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A former member wrote:
a beautiful poem. I like the way you express that sadness. when life really begins it is too late already, that sounds so cruel. this shall be a favorite of mine =D
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On Sunday, April 3, 2011, ANGELSLAYER
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wrote:
It seems that all of life is comprised of chaos and tranquility won't come until we're dead. ( If then )
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A former member wrote:
this is wonderful :) i really liked it
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A former member wrote:
our rage is the blood that keeps our hearts beating.
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On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, Dark Nymph
(25) wrote:
My precious thoughts. Such a poet and you didnt know it!
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