Louisiana Loser

By Chalin

in so little
Time you have become
what you could not
Be. For us

i lost so much and
you gave so little.
now your life mirrors what
should have been Ours.

so easily you give
and take away-i should not
be concerned, this too will pass and
you will leave just as you came

into her. and everything i
could have given you.
temporary happiness is all
that you are capable of achieving-

and providing…That you
are still the same cunt-loving
Disloyal that you have always been.

i know the outcum of your lies.
and what must be done once you have
planted your genetic debasement in
fertile soil.

and so will the next. and her after.


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© 2007 Chalin
Published on Tuesday, February 20, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: genetic debasement in fertile soil... your choice of words captures the mood perfectly.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, February 22, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Hell yeah! Fantastic to see a new one from you! "what must be done once you have planted your genetic debasement in fertile soil"...makes me shudder a bit... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Great write full of expression. Scholar

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