SHINING HAPPY DREAM

By prettydisgrace

just like a star im always shining
shining i am always happy
happy days now they seem so far
far away like a distant memory
memory fading almost a dream
dream a dream and it may come true
true life it seems too hard to live
live my life and then youd see
see a life where you wouldnt want to be.

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© 2007 bitter_sweet
Published on Sunday, February 18, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Eric On Monday, June 11, 2007, Eric (78)By person wrote:

    I wish I could have a shiny happy dream.. Great write.

  • A former member wrote: sad yet simple..i like it alot.~Amanda~

  • A former member wrote: I loved the transitional style.(sigh)the grass is never greener is it?

  • Drea On Sunday, March 4, 2007, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    I liked this. Welcome to DP.

  • prettydisgrace On Sunday, March 4, 2007, prettydisgrace (96)By person wrote:

    Thank you Drea x and thank you allll!

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    I enjoyed this very much.

  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, February 22, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    fuck, i love the stars and dreams combo, they always go good together, kinda like vodka and orange juice, always good.... but regardless, u got a style i dig, will have to keep my eye on you

  • A former member wrote: Short and simple. Cute style, yet sad poem. I Like

  • LOKI On Monday, February 19, 2007, LOKI (164)By person wrote:

    I like the simplicity of it.And the way you wrote it was good to.Unique i would say.Nice write.And welcome to this place.LOKI

  • Tania On Monday, February 19, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    i like this.. very touching.. sad write.. thank you for sharing.

  • Tania On Monday, February 19, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    jo my chic mail me anytime :)

  • A former member wrote: Too personal for me to comment on. Just know I feel your pain.

  • Cattarax On Sunday, February 18, 2007, Cattarax (215)By person wrote:

    So many of us would take any one else's over are own ... it always seems better then what we personally have to deal with ... ~T~

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