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Faded
By Tania
Your memory is fading.. This constant revere.. it slowly slides away…
Like a flashing neon light that’s just about
to diffuse… it struggles to flicker..
but after a while.. it just stops.
and as the night sky still shines black..
I look to the stars..
I see your face…
It looks so far away now…
Traces of your smile still grace the skyline..
And it enlightens my heart..
But only for a while..
As the wind blows.. things change..
Emotions they slip away..
like the final tear falling to its ultimate death..
I wipe it slowly from my face
Watching it slowly elapse...
Like closing the pages to
An over and done
chapter.. your
memory.. I
just let
it go..
.
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© 2007 Tania
Published on Wednesday, February 14, 2007.
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On Sunday, August 26, 2007, Sketso
(435)
wrote:
Well done... I can relate. Isn't odd how even the memories we don't want to let go of eventually fade?
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On Sunday, June 10, 2007, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
that ending was torment in text. I loved this piece, and I think i need to erad more of your stuff.
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A former member wrote:
This puts a picture in my head of you saying this piece while your sitting on the beach somewhere looking at the colors of the sunset on the ever moving ocean...
I love this......... __josh__
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Vilification
(20) wrote:
i agree with anna in the fact that this was beautifully done i enjoyed the read...
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On Monday, February 26, 2007, DarkLord
(7) wrote:
Very emotional, I like this...
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A former member wrote:
damn, i really enjoyed this..sort of breathy and capturing, a reverent breath clinging to a soft sort of love. you should write in this style more, it really works for you. beautifully done.
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On Friday, February 16, 2007, Disassembly Boy
(61) wrote:
Beautifully written, and I love the imagery.. :)
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A former member wrote:
definately one of my favs from you so far. nicely done as always. ~ red.
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On Friday, February 16, 2007, Tania
(197) wrote:
aww shucks! ;)
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On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
art is deeply personal and reflects yourself. unique like fingerprints or snowflakes, you have a certain grace, an elegance to your style. have more faith in yourself, this was passionate and delecate. superb :)
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A former member wrote:
God this was wonderful. Well done.
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On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, Mistress Shadow
(252) wrote:
You chose your words in such a way that tragedy seeps in between them. Well done. ~T
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On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, prettydisgrace
(96) wrote:
wonderful write tania.you really know how to capture emotion.pleasent read.
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On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, LOKI
(164) wrote:
Very nice I like the closure in the end.I just let it go.Good finishing lines
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On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
I think the ending wraps this piece up perfectly. it is crushing, yet powerful. Wonderful write.
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A former member wrote:
this is very insightful -quite soothing in a plaintive sort of way -some great lines.
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