Moonlight and the Weight of Empty Shadows

By Fading_Smile

It's funny,

How easy it is for me to follow the blind,
for those who have seen the light linger
on the borders of shadows and darkness, unsteady.

and those who see the world through hollow
eyes know it is nothing but darkness.


and it's ironic,

Finding a colorblind understanding,
a medium between lonliness and bleeding colors,
resolve to shadows and their charred inquisition.


Try to understand,
and ask yourself.

In a black and white existence,
what shade of grey is the lining of your soul?


and retreat,

into the darkest
of white lights.

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© 2007 Fading_Smile
Published on Wednesday, February 7, 2007.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: damn...tyhisis a good write

  • Grey Lies On Monday, February 19, 2007, Grey Lies (186)By person wrote:

    whoa. this blew me away. such playing of the words. this is awesome.

  • A former member wrote: oh this is stunning. i love this.

  • Morbid_insanity On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, Morbid_insanity (75)By person wrote:

    I like the way you write. It really makes you think about yourself. and your writing is so unique its a good thing im not dumb cause I'd be really lost. lol But a beautiful write nevertheless. Wouldnt expect any less from you.

  • TaintedButterfly On Friday, February 9, 2007, TaintedButterfly (670)By person wrote:

    Afreakinmazing Blake! It always baffles me that you are so young, but yet, you write such extraoridinary pieces. Wisdom filled, and makes one think. Beautiful, as are you hun.

  • A former member wrote: This is timeless. We should all ask ourselves these questions. Splendid write.

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    wonderful write.

  • soul dancer On Wednesday, February 7, 2007, soul dancer (96)By person wrote:

    "what shade of grey is the lining of your soul"....great writing.

  • A former member wrote: Nicely done, kid. An excellent bit spoken beyond your years. A good positive message.

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