Untimely (him inside you)

By Methos

A moment of weakness
a fleeting thought
well intentioned i'm sure
though the same end result
naive and somewhat needy
i called to inquire
to see if all was well
as it happened it would seem
i caught you at a bad moment
with a dick in your throat
ahh sorry to bother you
i didn't mean to disturb
so simple for you to forget
just yesterday i believe
yes, yes it was only a day
when we laid beneath the moon
and talked of space you needed
had i known of the space you required
I might have thought twice,
about calling this night
to see if you made it home
alive and well, perhaps
this is what i needed
to burn that picture, i so
treasured...

so glad my love was for
nothing more than a common
soon to be diseased whore..

Well the moment was sweet
and the sentiment lasting
and never again will i feel
the need to call and see
if you made it home
not on new years night,
or ever really again
i'm glad to see, oddly,
that these years of life
were so easily brushed away
you must show me your trick
or perhaps it requires more
like a spell one must cast
preparations to be made
touch of garlic to the tip
perhaps a clove cigarette
insert slowly or ram it home?
funny how i could forget
that damned space you need
ahh yes excuses now
the wine, the moment, the feelings
all the hurt that i somehow
gave through loving you
you poor thing, perhaps you
should just form a line of...
your much needed space.

slamming the phone for effect
I beg for the gods to grant me
a swift timely death...

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© 2007 Methos
Published on Monday, January 1, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Jaded Jezzabelle On Thursday, March 12, 2009, Jaded Jezzabelle (328)By person wrote:

    METHOS...I'M SO SORRY YOU HAD TO GO THROUGH THIS PAIN.....SHE DOESN'T DESERVE YOU !!!! NEVER EVER DID.

  • italianbella On Sunday, December 23, 2007, italianbella (185)By person wrote:

    I liked this very bitter and agry bu the emotion behind it def sit in great write

  • A former member wrote: God, the whore in this piece reminds me of myself. :-/ Nice write though.

  • Arianna On Monday, January 1, 2007, Arianna (105)By person wrote:

    ouch...this has hurt, bitterness, anger...all the emotions we feel when we find out someone isn't really who/what we thought. Nice write. ~A

  • Aunty Depressant On Monday, January 1, 2007, Aunty Depressant (434)By person wrote:

    I'm sorry...but can't help to think, "who the hell would pick up a phone with a dick in their mouth"...I mean, silently spooning with another is a different story...

  • Aunty Depressant On Monday, January 1, 2007, Aunty Depressant (434)By person wrote:

    So hard to know if needing space means one is overwhelmed, confused... or making distance to dump you or do somebody else.

  • elisa On Monday, January 1, 2007, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    wow..... reminds me of the piece of shit i dated........give them enough space to drowned in.....well said.

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