I’ll clean your wounds tonight

By Armor for your life

I’ve seen the flowers fight to touch the sun.

Much like Icarus
But with a better outcome.

I’ve seen the stars shoot across the sky
In search of a better position
In the landscape of night.

Much like me
And my place in your life.

But I’ve never seen
An angel struggle so hard to leave heaven
For a chance to be on earth

A place known for the ache it inflicts
On the already burdened hearts of man.

You’re hurt,
I can hear it in your voice
And I noticed it in your face.

Yet,
You still stay here
In this less than stellar place,
When there is so much more waiting for you.

Darling,
For all the hurt you’ve gone through…

I’ll clean your wounds tonight.

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© 2006 Armor for your life
Published on Wednesday, December 27, 2006.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • xserratedsoulx On Friday, January 18, 2008, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    i just fav-ed it. because i love it.

  • xserratedsoulx On Friday, January 18, 2008, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    i love it. especially the very first line. stunning.

  • A former member wrote: God damn I love everything that you've written.

  • Bella Butchery On Friday, December 29, 2006, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    ditto to k_love

  • K_Love On Wednesday, December 27, 2006, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Touching and beautiful to take care of someone. Lovely write. I love the reference to Icarus it fitting nicely, wonderful and perfectly flowing write.

  • A former member wrote: "But I've never seen an angel struggle so hard to leave heaven..." Oh wow...to give up the the beauty of acceptance for something that might lead to pain and rejection in the end...this is excellent, the imagery flittering across my eyelids. ~*Beth*~

  • Carnapharnelia On Wednesday, December 27, 2006, Carnapharnelia (14)By person wrote:

    "But I’ve never seen/ An angel struggle so hard to leave heaven/For a chance to be on earth" Wonderful.

  • Aunty Depressant On Wednesday, December 27, 2006, Aunty Depressant (434)By person wrote:

    It is a nice sentiment..but I am a pervert.. :P :P :P :P....had to tickle my brain...(cause I'm really a cocker spaniel)

  • Arianna On Wednesday, December 27, 2006, Arianna (105)By person wrote:

    gorgeous.... ~A

  • elisa On Wednesday, December 27, 2006, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    such a tender moment in these words...absolutely beautiful.

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