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endurance
By girlafraid
He’s really out there
a semi-conscious state of self induced indulgence
whirlwinds of panoramic interest
settle him into explanations and justifications
he’s doing quite well, actually
living solely in his moments
My face might be her,
to him
my words,
her flapping red flags
but I am different
I move along quietly
slowly detaching the threads
regrettably undetected
how much more
before I break into a run?
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© 2006 girlafraid
Published on Saturday, December 16, 2006.
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A former member wrote:
This is beautiful & heartful!
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On Wednesday, June 13, 2007, Moonflower
(301)
wrote:
i must say i love the bluntness. wonderflly written
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A former member wrote:
"slowly detaching the threads
regrettably undetected"...incredible write!
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On Monday, February 19, 2007, Bella Butchery
(724) wrote:
hopefully you already broke into a sprint by now, love the blunt, subtle imegry, and how you seem to keep your heart on your sleeve in this piece
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On Thursday, January 18, 2007, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
This piece reminded me so much of a person I tried to love/help who broke my heart. I ended up running. *hugs to you* xxx
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On Friday, December 22, 2006, missanthropic
(26) wrote:
i love the feeling of being fractured that this piece has...not quite a break but potentially twice as dangerous. it really is very well crafted.
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On Sunday, December 17, 2006, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
i've yet to meet anyone who needs such a serious shaking. you're all he's got but he doesn't get it . be strong cookie ... funguy
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On Sunday, December 17, 2006, Mari
(425) wrote:
..and id say put on your nikes and get ready for a sprint man! lol
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On Sunday, December 17, 2006, Mari
(425) wrote:
niiiiceee. ew i hate the word "flapping". but i like the poem anyway =)
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On Saturday, December 16, 2006, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
concise and sharp as a blade...................well done.......urban
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