magdelene and the libertine ver.1

By whisperer

dead rolling

i'm sure of envy now



maybe i'm better off this way





if i wake up

then i'll just lay down with medicated indifference


your voice to me brings the promise of a bullet hole
the marks on the wall are not mine, cold and catatonic i'll be a dream and a thought regardless far more than either of us know








someday

i'll get away to someplace where the same is not today


and i'll see you




from somewhere far away




i'll be screaming, "hey! magdelene! guess who's a fucking libertine!




wake to a different face......whenever



it's disappointing






the mirror atrophied this life of pointless flesh, cum, and convulsions


i've fucked your ego

i made it dance deleriously, all night i slept with my beautiful enemy




and what do i get?
out of this experience....



silence and jaded reality




..........emotions' li-ber-tine...........

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© 2006 whisperer
Published on Friday, December 15, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • LOKI On Saturday, December 16, 2006, LOKI (164)By person wrote:

    Wicked and insightful.Good write

  • elisa On Saturday, December 16, 2006, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    twisted.... Sinner meets Seducer....perhaps..... ...puts a smile on my face.

  • KittyStryker On Saturday, December 16, 2006, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    wow. this really tossed me around. i like it, quite a bit.

  • A former member wrote: ...so where's ver. 2?

  • A former member wrote: Okay..I think I'm done raising my eyebrows. ..this..was..intensely vocalized.. a different tone from you than I'm used to, but still you.. well done, love.

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