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Venus Beat Overdrive
By Rebel_not_Radical
my
feet
goes
tap
tap tap tap
tap tap tap tap tap
tap tap tap tap
tap
because there goes
the percussion eyes
flashing blue-electric
swinging to your beatiful
strides in saxophone sex beats
im nearing acheron in
erotic overdrive
..ooooh...
...oohohh....
you are a private venus
as we rendezvous
i want to taste you
lick you, love you
can you see my smile
against your lies
be mine mon amour
...be mine...
tap
tap tap tap
tap tap tap tap tap
tap tap tap tap
tap
my
heart
just
stopped
pretty soon we'll be there
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© 2006 Tetch de la Cruz
Published on Sunday, November 12, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Venus Beat Overdrive"
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A former member wrote:
"the percussion eyes
flashing blue-electric" I love the rhythm & beat of this poem... and the title is fantastic. There's a certain Mona Lisa painted touch to this one. Well done.
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On Monday, November 13, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564)
wrote:
OOO!!!!!!!! Tetch! Your incredible.. You made my heart beat my mind race.. My palms sweat and my world spin!....~Gothic
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On Monday, November 13, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
ummm, oh yeah, uhhuh. You rock!
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, blue
(1454) wrote:
=) I dig it, yup. ~b
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On Sunday, November 12, 2006, mozarts cat
(184) wrote:
'the percussion eyes flashing blue-electric swinging to your beatiful strides' offbeat and gorgeous ..
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