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A Father's Trust - Sonnet 1
By Delphoid-Q
Do it now, my son
For today shall slip away;
But if it's in your memory won
It forever there shall stay.
Do it now, my child
For tomorrow shall not wait;
Though you may think time's passage mild
Let that not your hunger sate.
Do it now, my blood
For your destiny must prevail;
And when you lie me in the mud
Beweep not my wayward trail.
For I formed you, and in you I eternally shall reside,
As a memory, hopefully, never to be cast aside.
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Copyright 2003 Delphoid-Q
Published on Thursday, April 10, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "A Father's Trust - Sonnet 1"
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On Monday, November 26, 2007, Circe Avalon
(115)
wrote:
this piece is very good, loved it. good write
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A former member wrote:
loved the whole thing. my son,my child, my blood. i like the way you used that.
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On Wednesday, May 11, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
heh, amazing... im in awe. *searches for words and only finds two* Great write ~*~Tart~*~
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A former member wrote:
nice, i like your sonnets full of angst, regret, fragility.and your subtle turns of wit and insite. check out (dying father)
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A former member wrote:
that was amazing. i liked it alot!!
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On Monday, November 8, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
I was not disappointed by this in the slightest, rare these days that a sonnet is created so impeccably and with a theme that is not a fabrication/rendition of shakespeare...brilliant :)
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On Friday, November 5, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Took away my breath .. I need to say that this could be a great song if song by the right person .. I need to fgavor this and hey man, I agree with Tiger , Damn dude
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Damn Del ...
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On Sunday, May 23, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
i loved the last stanza. the whole poem just have a smooth feel to it. excellent. :)
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On Thursday, February 12, 2004, flying_fox
(573) wrote:
You've captured the essence of this style well...I very much enjoyed this. FF
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On Thursday, January 8, 2004, Methos
(121) wrote:
artwork at its best..your words flow together, forging emotions that inspire..simple passionate work, with beautiful imagery..-Methos
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On Sunday, July 27, 2003, cre
(411) wrote:
I have loved this one for a long time. It's written so well and bespeaks such quiet and sure wisdom. Strong and well-done.
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On Saturday, July 12, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
oo its so pretty. i like it loads. -B
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A former member wrote:
Amazing and touching... beautiful work
-Raeven
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On Thursday, May 1, 2003, Saint_Reaper
(203) wrote:
ireally appreciate your comment.....this poem is one of the better ones i have heard in a long time....dont stop writting.
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2003, IceDragoness
(195) wrote:
This somehow reminded me a lot of the english songs from the renaissance, very cool ~Dawn
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On Tuesday, April 29, 2003, ColdScaredAlone
(80) wrote:
this was awesome. i love your sentence structure... This was really powerful....
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On Tuesday, April 22, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
This is powerful and well written. When we will see more?
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On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
wow it's great wish my dad trusted me but i love your poems and think they're great keep up the good work.
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On Friday, April 18, 2003, KittyStryker
(711) wrote:
Stunning as well. Kepp writing; I will be behind you with a whip keeping that talented nose to its grindstone!
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On Tuesday, April 15, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Very good piece! Usually I don't like rhyming verses, because they seem to be sing-songy and not well thought out, but this had a classical feel to it and was brimming with the sense of wisdom
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On Tuesday, April 15, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
one feels when reading the works of the old masters. Good job! Ciao, T/S
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On Sunday, April 13, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
Very well written poem. I look forward to reading more from you.
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On Saturday, April 12, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl
(253) wrote:
Great poem. Welcome to darkpoetry.com :-)
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On Friday, April 11, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Well Well Well... Well Done. Interesting First Peice Of Work... I Think Many More Gems Will Follow... I'm Pretty Certain. I'm Serious About This One! GPhd
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On Saturday, April 12, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Thanx my friend. I'll try to keep 'em coming.
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