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Sinking
By asailorsangel
As I descend into my pool
of murky abyss the silence
conquers me.
The demons are grasping at
my thoughts
Chasing me
with relentless
pursuit.
Under my fear
Over my love
and
Around my trust.
Attacking me at
every
corner like
a disease.
Its pulling at my hair
its tearing at my sight
I can't escape the
ignorance of this
situation.
RT03'
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Copyright 2003 asailorsangel
Published on Wednesday, April 9, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Saturday, January 15, 2005, knightmirror
(426)
wrote:
*Under my fear Over my love and Around my trust.*.....fucking brilliance in a nutshell...and the title is superb...*pats you on the back*...be proud of this...very proud....-knight
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A former member wrote:
Wow, keep writing like this! Good job!!
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A former member wrote:
Great work. Ignorance is bliss. Yay.
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On Thursday, April 10, 2003, Raze Drake
(85) wrote:
Wow. I have to admit, I was put to amazement. The style was so different, and it made for a great poem. I am new around here, but I will say that this has been one of the best pieces I have seen so far. I hope to see more great works like this one.
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A former member wrote:
it seems after a while that the pursuit is endless, until one chooses the ground on which to fight; thx for the read
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On Wednesday, April 9, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets
(55) wrote:
nice, i liked it keep writing thanks for sharing
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