Defy my Master (this puppet has cut his strings)

By Thorn

"I'm done with this game"

These words said, and I am free

Free from the grip of a subtle puppet master

Pulling strings from behind a pretty face

I am my own person
No one can bind me
I am a free spirit
I'll do what I please

Words cannot harm me

I know what I am
I know where I stand

Say what you will
I will not be moved
I know what I want
To that, I'll stay true

No more "Please forgive me."
No more "Master, may I?"
No more chains and cages

This bird

Has got

To fly

No more double-standards
No more clipped wings
No more submission

This puppet

Has cut

His strings

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Published on Sunday, October 15, 2006. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Defy my Master (this puppet has cut his strings)"

On Saturday, September 8, 2007, serotonin lost (145) wrote:

defiance is the only happiness to be found in servatude
On Wednesday, November 1, 2006, thornyrose (23) wrote:

i've been gone for a while...tis good to come back and see such raw expression..keep up the great writes.
A former member wrote: you did a good job with this one, just like all the others... and yeah you know the rest. :)
On Monday, October 16, 2006, Malice In Wonderland (987) wrote:

this is beautiful, Jet, as you say, you weren;t born to be held down...thisis lovely, I can't say enough of how this makes me feel...
On Monday, October 16, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564) wrote:

Incredible, the power and strength that rised into the ending. As the world falls apart for you to newly discover everything beautiful. Kind of the feel I got from this ~Gothic
On Monday, October 16, 2006, Nail Bunny (161) wrote:

That is fucking great. You never were built for strings. I'm glad they're gone.
On Monday, October 16, 2006, Thorn (283) wrote:

So am I, Bunny. So am I.
A former member wrote: YAY for the strong spirited soul who refuses to be enslaved by any other!!! very well done Thorn, I'll chant this as my prayer tonight....~RAIN~
On Monday, October 16, 2006, Thorn (283) wrote:

I'm honored :)
On Sunday, October 15, 2006, Irioth (7) wrote:

Ah, good poem. Really easy to relate to.
A former member wrote: Wow! I liked it. I can be put forth to just about anything. and mean it to just about anyone. Nicely written
On Sunday, October 15, 2006, Thorn (283) wrote:

It's a bit rough around the edges, but I was suddenly inspired. The result: a raw expression of emotion.
On Saturday, October 21, 2006, Malice In Wonderland (987) wrote:

that seems to happen alot with you...;-)