The City Flowers

By NeroMatches



“I write poetry but I am no poet,” I told her.
She was on the edge of her seat, listening,
As I unraveled one of the secrets of the universe
While we sat in that pavilion overlooking the city.

“Poets can transfigure the stars into brief
glances from the eye, and I can only imagine doing that.”

And it was true.

Last night, I slept on my rooftop waiting for something profound
To hit me. There was none. Something profound just wasn’t there
And it will never be, I concluded

She said that she didn’t believe me,
And that she thought I could be a poet if I wanted to.

I told her that poets can make people feel
What they feel, make people see the world through
Their eyes, and make people know that they love other people
Just through words

She said that I can
But when she read this, she did not realize that
It was her I was writing about,

And when I told her I loved her
She told me that she did not know what love meant.

I then sat back on the concrete wall
And watched a bird being electrified on a wet cable.





After a while,

She said she heard my heart break
But she did not know that it was only a wine glass
Being thrown over the moon and falling unto the cracks
That lined the beach where the asteroids land.

And there, I began to wonder.

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Jules Joaquin
Published on Sunday, October 1, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Stephanie Sideways On Tuesday, December 25, 2012, Stephanie Sideways (276)By person wrote:

    I love the way your mind meanders in this. It felt a bit like being in a mirrored room, looking at yourself looking at yourself....... ( not a very clear expression but hopefully you get what I mean)

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Saturday, November 26, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274)By person wrote:

    This one as well, great write!

  • A former member wrote: oh wow! i loved this. tears were trying to fight their way out as i read this. i feel this. i can never write something this deep down, it's refreshing to be able to read it from another soul.

  • Lynaes On Thursday, February 1, 2007, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    I certainly believe you've just made me feel what you were feeling. This so wonderfully honest. scattered, delicate and pretty pieces of speaking from the heart..

  • Lynaes On Thursday, February 1, 2007, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    like those little silver stars you get in a plastic tube, strewn over a glass table. Vivid, beautiful. I love this.

  • A former member wrote: "I then sat back on the concrete wall And watched a bird being electrified on a wet cable." This is poignant, powerful, the perfect kind of poetic prose that I like. The poetry is in the telling of the story, and it is poetic,...

  • carlosjackal On Friday, December 15, 2006, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    Wow..I loved the conversational tone of this..like the recounting of a story to a friend. Jules, you're most definitely a poet.

  • mozarts cat On Wednesday, October 11, 2006, mozarts cat (184)By person wrote:

    i still love this ..

  • AniDayz On Sunday, October 1, 2006, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    . . .stellar-if-ically.spoken. . .

  • xserratedsoulx On Sunday, October 1, 2006, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    just added it to my favorites. thank you for writing this.

  • xserratedsoulx On Sunday, October 1, 2006, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    I HAVE FUCKING GOOSEBUMPS. THIS IS THE BEST THING I'VE READ ALL DAY.

  • Alanarchy On Sunday, October 1, 2006, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    This simply glows.

  • Rebel_not_Radical On Sunday, October 1, 2006, Rebel_not_Radical (78)By person wrote:

    ~i'd say it came from an interesting conversation with somebody eh? *cough* girls *cough*...*cough* jules is finally in love *cough*...very cool write man

  • blue On Sunday, October 1, 2006, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    not a poet? rediculous, it was the reader who fell short. ~b

  • Dancing_Monkey On Sunday, October 1, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    I realy liked this write aswell. It has perspective

  • elisa On Sunday, October 1, 2006, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    ...the inconceivable ..manifested....truly a boundless scenario...very nice.

  • mozarts cat On Sunday, October 1, 2006, mozarts cat (184)By person wrote:

    gods, this reminds me of so much ..

  • Anth On Sunday, October 1, 2006, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    it too reminded me of much, like a glimpse of all thats been missing , a truly beautiful encapsulating write

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