Cuts

By mywristshurt

03-03-04

There are so many cuts
to count on my wrists.
To many days in a week
That acctually fit.
To late in the night
And to early in the day
To make this life go into cuts...
Which don't go away.
After all this hell
You put me through
I am still going back to you.
These cuts go so deeply in my skin
It seems like they
Are my only friend.
I've been nice all I could
And it seems that I should be understood.
My heart is broken,
I am a loner
And my wrists have a lot of
Cuts.

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© 2006 CrumbledRosePetals
Published on Wednesday, September 27, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i do'nt have alot of scars, but i'm getting there. great write. it really touched me.

  • xserratedsoulx On Sunday, January 13, 2008, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    i like the part about trying to make life fit into your cuts.

  • A former member wrote: I have so many scars so I would be a bad liar if I said I didn't relate. great write, wondefully written. ~Silver~

  • A former member wrote: scars! have bunches...it's addictive.and u really dont feel any pain when u do it, or i dont..great write..very relatible

  • CharlottesWeb On Sunday, November 26, 2006, CharlottesWeb (511)By person wrote:

    I don't read cutter poems realy...they all sound the same to me. But this one is different...it touched me. Thank you for sharing.

  • Savannah On Thursday, November 9, 2006, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    My wrists have lots of scars too. I feel for you.

  • darkdesires On Monday, October 16, 2006, darkdesires (139)By person wrote:

    every scar I have gives me one more reason to stay strong now... great write I feel your pain...

  • A former member wrote: I have scars too nice write

  • Myrrhkuri the fallen one On Thursday, October 5, 2006, Myrrhkuri the fallen one (94)By person wrote:

    so many scars, so little canvas...truly a lovely depressing piece of your soul

  • A former member wrote: i totally loved this!!


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