They All Resemble

By A_Puppet_Show


Jump the next train,
we will meet! ready,
strong, forgiving,
as death - I am not:


At night I haunt the station,
a phantom train saw me, there,
I see them turn face - is it him?
turn to the next: clos(e)ure, no!

A jumper not lost,
a rabbit not found,
and after morning -
I remember daddy.



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© 2006 Blinded_Tiger
Published on Wednesday, August 23, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I like it but I must confess I am Confused.

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, August 24, 2006, TaintedButterfly (670)By person wrote:

    You know that old saying..."you know what happens when the rabbit dies..." Damn this is a brain boggler! It gives off so many different meanings, well to me it did. I thank Solace for commenting or I would have never seen it. Wow! Julia~

  • Solace On Wednesday, August 23, 2006, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Wow...this is full of its own feeling...that expectation, that nervous and dread...i know that feeling and will always haunt the station myself...waiting...

  • Solace On Wednesday, August 23, 2006, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    and yet its more than that, you never leave a trail of obviousness to an expected closure...but always leave us waiting, anticipating and then scouring words for meaning - reading and re-reading and finding our own way in the dark

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