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Smile in the Dark (I Only Smile in the Dark)
By Fading_Smile
The substance of your soft promises
always filled the void of
my hairline fractured heart
when our deadweight romance
rested on eachother's smiles
we blew out every candle
the fire in your eyes
is more than enough
Your name spelled in scars
and constellations of stars
I'd pull the moon closer
to distract you from my arms
But the clouds selfishly took
the sky away from us
and for once I hoped love was blind
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© 2006 Fading_Smile
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On Wednesday, August 30, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
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wrote:
i will tell you honestly that ive never FELT this much from reading anything, the closest ive come till you is jenny holzer. your very inpressive
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A former member wrote:
"for once I hoped love was blind" Beth is right, you have a way with endings.
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A former member wrote:
"hairline fractured heart" & "I'd pull the moon closer to distract you from my arms"..beautiful. and you've quite a talent for ending a poem..like a cold slap. gorgeous write.
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A former member wrote:
"But the clouds selfishly took/the sky away from us/and for once I hoped love was blind" Damn...this...shit, I have no way to put my emotions into words. This is above and beyond any comment I could stutter out. ~*Beth*~
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On Sunday, August 13, 2006, Emma Lee
(8) wrote:
Beautiful....
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On Sunday, August 13, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
*I just fell to the floor!* Damn Blake, you always make my heart stop for a second, and leave me at a loss for words, and breath! Love truly is feeling & not seeing. Beautiful! Julia~
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