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Insomniac [Love] Letters
By Rachel
I can't sleep [him out of my mind]
but I'll keep trying,
Because I'm terrified (of [not having] him.)
I miss him when he's far
love him when he's near
and I swore I'd never be this
this girl,
can't.eat.can't.sleep.can't.stop and I'm falling
and
I [don't] want this to end.
There's just something about the way he looks at me
leaves me gasping for air
and something about the way he touches me
Leaves me always.wanting..more...
...How easily it has been
to become a cliche.
But it feels so fucking right.
THIS is where I'm supposed to be.
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© 2006 Rachel
Published on Monday, July 31, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Insomniac [Love] Letters"
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A former member wrote:
Oh and I meant, the guy, not the poem, with the "not all bad things don't have a means to change"...oh god that make me sound like a bitch.
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A former member wrote:
Not all bad things don't have means to change. I love how you keep it to the point...do not get me wrong, it comes out just so right, whether you have a way pf making it that way or it's just the emotion you put inside of it.
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On Tuesday, September 19, 2006, Bluegirl
(177)
wrote:
This is so beautiful, Rachel :)
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On Friday, August 4, 2006, Thorn
(283) wrote:
Amen. I appreciate how you put this into words. I was in this situation a while back but could not describe it.
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On Tuesday, August 1, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Familiar. This piece was so simple and natural. I'm with you. I just feels right.
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On Monday, July 31, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
damn ......a sharp stab through the heart.........with my mind lingering in a vulnerable moment .....without even making a sound..i can hear my voice in these words.
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