Sprite is so Good

By mywristshurt

11-10-05

The sweet taste sizzles in your mouth,
It's so foamy with goodness.
I'm pretty sure it comes from the south,
But man do I want more.

It's bad for me
I know.
But I'll give you an example
To show.

The lemon lime waters my throat
And graciously trickles down.
If it's quiet you can hear the sound
of the liquid running by.

Don't ask why I like it,
I just do.
It sucks when I don't drink it,
And it's NOT like Mountain Dew!

It's the bestest drink ever!
I won't let anyone change it,
Never!
It's just that...

Sprite is so good!

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© 2006 CrumbledRosePetals
Published on Sunday, July 16, 2006.     Filed under: "Comedy" and "Poetry"
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Comments on "Sprite is so Good"

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  • Dancing_Monkey On Tuesday, August 29, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    I*m a coke guy

  • mywristshurt On Saturday, July 29, 2006, mywristshurt (408)By person wrote:

    i love you too edenscancer.. lol.. and your write, that shit does make you thirsty.. i used to be obsessed with sprite, but now i love kool-aid.. don't ask.. i just posted this to see what people would say

  • A former member wrote: heh, I'll admit sprite it a pretty good soda, though I remain a rootbeer girl... I think its funny though that sodas can actually make the drinker more thirsty (and hungry)

  • A former member wrote: *runs to get sprite* great way to show you love somethig...

  • A former member wrote: ... damn now I'm thirsty!

  • edenscancer On Sunday, July 16, 2006, edenscancer (33)By person wrote:

    i think i love you lol

  • Fading_Smile On Sunday, July 16, 2006, Fading_Smile (29)By person wrote:

    hey, i liked this, it was humorous, something different from ur usual, pretty cool.

  • TaintedButterfly On Sunday, July 16, 2006, TaintedButterfly (670)By person wrote:

    haha! Too cute... and I concur, Sprite is good! Julia~


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