secrets of the camel

By LovesInjecedVirus

closing her hand

withholding memories

between her fingers

chasing after

passion

love

and flashbacks of obsession

shes unsure of feeling

of the abilities she posesses

insecure and afraid

it just wont be enough

to make her stay

is it real?

this bond of imagination and reality

its makin my emothions stranded

and ... questionable

am i good enough?

be honest

am i questionable

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© 2006 LovesInjecedVirus
Published on Friday, July 14, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • heart broken suicide On Friday, July 14, 2006, heart broken suicide (18)By person wrote:

    it was hard to follow but it is really good

  • mywristshurt On Friday, July 14, 2006, mywristshurt (408)By person wrote:

    well, if i knew you well enough i would be able to answer.. otherwise, the writing was okay for me.. i know you can do a little bit better..

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