A Soldier's Dawn

By mysticventures




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© 2006 mysticventures
Published on Tuesday, July 11, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • freudian-slip On Thursday, April 17, 2008, freudian-slip (239)By person wrote:

    and all the red tape that goes with it. more to come? g

  • A former member wrote: Damn stright MV. A-fuckin'-men.

  • Bella Butchery On Friday, September 21, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    how true... our inner turmoils and trials bare no resemblance and will never compare to those of a soldier.... simple, but hits with the force of a mac truck

  • sixsixnine On Monday, July 24, 2006, sixsixnine (477)By person wrote:

    damn you! this is love...... huh?

  • Sin On Saturday, July 15, 2006, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    stinging and powerful, like a slap to the face...its so good to see you posting again ~kristy

  • A former member wrote: Great piece. just a really raw and clear portrayal.

  • Dissolving Poet On Tuesday, July 11, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    It was just incredible the few words here spoke loudly and higher with each one. ~nightly

  • A former member wrote: I can relate totally with just these few words. I'm a Marine. Great piece.

  • sIo On Tuesday, July 11, 2006, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    this makes my stomach queezy.

  • TaintedButterfly On Tuesday, July 11, 2006, TaintedButterfly (670)By person wrote:

    Ouch! Such truth in every single line. Julia~

  • Army Barbie On Tuesday, July 11, 2006, Army Barbie (324)By person wrote:

    *Sigh*

  • Army Barbie On Tuesday, July 11, 2006, Army Barbie (324)By person wrote:

    I dunno how to comment on this. Probably because I've seen it damnit.

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