Log In
weaving Smoke rings and Silver strings.
By Dei
Have you ever sat out side,
Blowing smoke rings around the moon?
Out of the corner of your eye
Something glimmers.
Silver strings weave together,
Making patterns
A spiders finger print on the world.
A death trap
Made of necessity.
Have you ever blown smoke into it?
Staring with amazement as it stops
Mid-air billowing around silver death
Before pressing through the holes
And melting away into the darkness?
I have.
And it was beautiful.
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
© 2006 Nefarious
Published on Wednesday, June 21, 2006.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "weaving Smoke rings and Silver strings."
Log in to post comments.
-
On Thursday, February 21, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795)
wrote:
it is always the small things that touch us the most...
-
On Friday, November 17, 2006, scorpionstale
(21) wrote:
This is extreamly beautiful. Simplicity capturing so much depth.
-
A former member wrote:
I totally relate to how you feel about the realness of the world and all of its simple beauties.
-
On Sunday, July 23, 2006, sIo
(926) wrote:
gorgeous.
-
A former member wrote:
Divine. I come back to this often.
-
On Monday, July 3, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
This is beautiful! Love the imagery - you painted the picture with your words so well. Ciao, T/S
-
On Wednesday, June 28, 2006, Mathesix
(40) wrote:
it's like you froze one moment in time and etched every delicate detail into an expressive mind-thought an awesome process. this is wonderful. -Josh
-
On Friday, June 23, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
:) that's so beautiful. I love it.
-
On Thursday, June 22, 2006, ShardsofSilence
(222) wrote:
beautifully captured.
-
On Thursday, June 22, 2006, Anth
(1133) wrote:
one of those transient moments that stills the world into a calm clarity and then fades , only you captured it and wove it into a stunnig poem
-
On Wednesday, June 21, 2006, Tonights Decision
(137) wrote:
caught in the moment.
-
On Wednesday, June 21, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
Excellent write... Loved it! Julia~
-
On Wednesday, June 21, 2006, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
this was a slow easy mind waltz of thought and images... delicate and intense at the same time... and yes it's beautiful how that happens...
Dei's Latest Works Feed
Join