ving love

By Lotophagi

high volt-age
is the
ving love
theory
we all submit

but when we subtract
from the love of the ving
we end with it simply

evolving

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© 2006 Lotophagi
Published on Friday, May 19, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Sunday, November 26, 2017, carlosjackal (3015)By person wrote:

    Too bloody clever by 'alf! This was a stunning atom splitter.

  • A former member wrote: this is still a trip... hope things are progressing well, best of wishes...

  • A former member wrote: provocative... provokes much thought about loving, and the many ways in which language imports meaning... how symbolic systems function independently of purpose and, evolve through the love of brilliant minds like you... thanks

  • stuart_pid On Thursday, May 25, 2006, stuart_pid (135)By person wrote:

    this is, you are, genius

  • AniDayz On Wednesday, May 24, 2006, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    absolutely fukking brilliant.

  • A former member wrote: *hugs* much dirtiness.

  • Guillotine On Friday, May 19, 2006, Guillotine (172)By person wrote:

    Havn't heard from you in a while - this had such a great idea behind it and a lot of symbolic meaning...loved it

  • A former member wrote: This is intellectually stunning.. untouchable precision, love doesn't have to exist for something to go on, the distinction between instinct and human representation of love.. I don't know, but you are awesome.

  • Six-Out On Friday, May 19, 2006, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    You've always been brilliant. I miss you.

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