deeper

By whisperer

sing







sing to me





bring me to life insiDE something thAt rides THe road to sanctuary




the steel IS cold against MY temple iN my stride to mAke an exaMplE of lonely

abbaddon holds the keys
disease of the invisible has brought my world to it's knees



crawling

gnawing......biting......breaking, hack and burning






all In a glance






pArt of the dreaMcraft



for yearS i've tried to destroy me but look at me now



i'm doing the best i've ever done in years and still i want to die



you Can only pusH the reset/reAligN button so many times before apathy crushes your hope like a bone in a vice creating no escape for yourself except deeper

within yourself

where Growing ragE blossoms and thrives


and Instead of trying to fly you retreat deeper

believing everything will fail



and die






i've unwittingly and

willingly

bitten every fuCking hANd tHat's fEeding me


you're Looking uP at the ground




i reach down
and grab your hair









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look at me
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and i'll fuck you within a stare
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YOU DIE

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© 2006 whisperer
Published on Sunday, May 7, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i don't want to believe this. i refuse to believe this..i will shut my eyes. the dream is you.

  • Dissolving Poet On Monday, May 8, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    Amazing, you still amaze me no matter what^.^ This was just perfecto

  • A former member wrote: *nods* Your prowess is vexing as it is severe. Compelling, the sort of pace that wraps around your mind and suffocates it.. 'til you depend on the last words as a release. definite skullfuck, I'll grant you that.

  • A former member wrote: I was waiting for this one.........

  • A former member wrote: Holy hell...the capitalized letters spelling out their own messages...and the imagery that you placed around those sentences...this piece is beyond beautiful, beyond excellent...just beyond. *Evangel*

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