deeper
By whisperer
sing
sing to me
bring me to life insiDE something thAt rides THe road to sanctuary
the steel IS cold against MY temple iN my stride to mAke an exaMplE of
lonely
abbaddon holds the keys
disease of the invisible has brought my world to it's knees
crawling
gnawing......biting......breaking, hack and burning
all In a glance
pArt of the dreaMcraft
for yearS i've tried to destroy me but look at me now
i'm doing the best i've ever done in years and still i want to die
you Can only pusH the reset/reAligN button so many times before apathy
crushes your hope like a bone in a vice creating no escape for yourself
except deeper
within yourself
where Growing ragE blossoms and thrives
and Instead of trying to fly you retreat deeper
believing everything will fail
and die
i've unwittingly and
willingly
bitten every fuCking hANd tHat's fEeding me
you're Looking uP at the ground
i reach down
and grab your hair
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look at me
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and i'll fuck you within a stare
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YOU DIE
Comments on "deeper"
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A former member wrote:
i don't want to believe this. i refuse to believe this..i will shut my eyes. the dream is you.
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On Monday, May 8, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
Amazing, you still amaze me no matter what^.^ This was just perfecto
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A former member wrote:
*nods* Your prowess is vexing as it is severe. Compelling, the sort of pace that wraps around your mind and suffocates it.. 'til you depend on the last words as a release. definite skullfuck, I'll grant you that.
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A former member wrote:
I was waiting for this one.........
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A former member wrote:
Holy hell...the capitalized letters spelling out their own messages...and the imagery that you placed around those sentences...this piece is beyond beautiful, beyond excellent...just beyond. *Evangel*