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Falling in the Arms of Silence
By Spiritus_Frumenti
I do not know why I still chase you across this path
As I become more uncertain of my wounds
In this illusion of an ending life
Where no one will ever know
how many times I have fallen
I do not know why I still care to speak from the heart
As I become more quiet with the years
In this dream of a hopeless mind
Where so much truth lies there
Piercing and bleeding my every memory
I do not know why I still wonder about God
As I often wish to come away from my soul
In this vision of an empty sky
Where all the prayers turn into rain
To soak us with our own pain and whispers…
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© 2006 Spiritus_Frumenti
Published on Thursday, May 4, 2006.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Falling in the Arms of Silence"
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A former member wrote:
Your words are hypnotic and inspirational.My works seem so mere to your wave of words.Thank you for sharing your soul with us! ;)
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A former member wrote:
excellent! I am searching now and questioning my existence, this has sent my thoughts into directions and depths that they have not visited in some times, thanks for a shear delight!
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On Friday, May 12, 2006, urbanhumility
(1175)
wrote:
wisdom has reached into your birth......your words have always "questioned" with artfull intelligence and practiced humility.............this prose is beautiful in is ask-ence........well done...........urban
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On Monday, May 8, 2006, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
painfully deep and introspective...
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A former member wrote:
stunning..this had a melancholy-ish feel to it, yet also smooth and tranquil. "In this dream of a hopeless mind Where so much truth lies there" truth and beauty, blended together. fantastic write.
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A former member wrote:
mon dieu..... its a paradox that i rush to your words and then they wound so deeply; exquisite and infinitely wished.written....almost a eulogy for what lies missing within each of us.....so glad you psoted...so glad indeed ~ness
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On Thursday, May 4, 2006, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Words washing down walls, their bleeding frames a moment in the mind - a moment of wonder and regret - mixing emotions and thoughts. One of the saddest thoughts I have is a world without you
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On Tuesday, June 27, 2006, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
damn...i read this comment a while ago and now i'm reading it again, realizing how much that means to me what you just said...thank you so much...i, too, feel the same way about your work...-l-
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A former member wrote:
sadly beautiful, had a very calming effect, the last two lines left a very sorrowful image...nice write ~Tamara
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