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So Hard
By Chalin
courteous
break-up of
company makes
my third eye
jealous-it pulses
with desire to be
made love to;
licked with lust
and let's make nice
to everything i
cannot see but
touch for spite
a sense for a sense,
i'll take you anyday,
(twice on sunday)
you wrote those words
in fingerpaint on my
heart-worst of all
is the mantra you make
out of recanting-
and reinforce it with
predictable disappearances
because it is easy-so
easy. to run from me.
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© 2006 Chalin
Published on Monday, April 24, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "So Hard"
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On Friday, April 13, 2007, capt_funguy
(778)
wrote:
this is like significance within a whirlpool of nothing ... like a lost universe touched by no gravity outside itself -- i'm trying to say ....
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On Friday, April 13, 2007, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
that when you read it, it's all that matters .. oneness ... powerful this ... funguy
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On Monday, July 3, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Wonderful imagery! I especially like the notion of your third eye jealous and desiring to be "licked with lust". Great one! Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
you make the best of each word.. this is something profound, snappy and sinful, it leave such an impression, brings forth instinctive human impulses/defenses.. deep formulation.
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On Wednesday, April 26, 2006, Sin
(1168) wrote:
brilliantly displayed...im so happy to see youre posting again ~kristy
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