Poetry..or something like it [[in search of a title]]

By hate_doll

Meet me at the methadone clinic

At 32nd and Regret

I'll nail our feet to the floor

So you can sit and get some rest

Don't tell me that it hurts too much

For i've seen you out at night

Sucking on a gold chain

Waiting for the right time

You live to give pain

And it's a self-inflicted pleasure

Your hungry eyes make wolves

Of men,but doesn't make them stay

Glamour isn't shot through a needle

Life isn't as broken as you think

And not a hundred thousand rainbows

could bring you back to innocence

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Published on Monday, April 17, 2006. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Poetry..or something like it [[in search of a title]]"

On Saturday, April 13, 2013, Salty Ships (31) wrote:

Sadness tinged with brutality.
On Sunday, January 27, 2008, SGT Bloth (163) wrote:

Try a title like...Needle whore..or maybe Desparate times
On Sunday, January 27, 2008, SGT Bloth (163) wrote:

Now this is a piece I can relate too...been through the whole drug scene..had my share of crack ho friends...It's sad when they give up...your write showed a lil hope Thanks Bloth Andii
On Friday, July 27, 2007, prettydisgrace (96) wrote:

another piece of brillinace from the random works here, i enjoyed this. the honesty, very intresting write here.
On Wednesday, June 28, 2006, urbanhumility (1175) wrote:

strict and deeply true...........well done............urban
A former member wrote: i believe the title could be something like....well, i don't know. i'm usually good at titles, but i believe i'm at a loss. this work is splendidly true.
On Tuesday, April 18, 2006, Blood of Winter (296) wrote:

It'll come to you, I'm sure it will, your words are always so well placed.
A former member wrote: Fuck... just fuuuck.
On Monday, April 17, 2006, Six-Out (1435) wrote:

This needs something as stunning as the words preseneted....I'll get back to you.
On Monday, April 17, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564) wrote:

Wow you just stunned me with words, I think I've taken a liking to your beautiful poetry