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It Kept me Awake
By mywristshurt
12-03-05
Tears,
Are but another word.
Fears
Are the voices unheard.
Pain,
Is the feeling of lost glory.
Shame,
Is the look of unfaith.
Sad,
Is the used expression of sorrow.
Mad
Is the hateful word of tomorrow.
Heartbreaks,
Are the things that make us loose control.
Headaches
Are but a minor injury to the soul.
Life,
Can make everything worth while.
Strife
Can make the things turn over-mild.
Death,
Can finally mean the end.
Breath,
Can finally be a friend.
It kept me awake,
So which ones do I take?
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© 2006 TheWhimperedRose
Published on Saturday, April 15, 2006.
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A former member wrote:
luved it woman.
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On Saturday, July 29, 2006, mywristshurt
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wrote:
thanks all of you.. i really appreaciate the comments and all they have done for me
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A former member wrote:
hmmm...very nice...beautiful composition
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A former member wrote:
its so plain this is how it is poem that i want to read again and again
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On Tuesday, April 25, 2006, Thorn
(283) wrote:
Hm. Well structured. I tip my hat to your ability to tap your imperfect life for inspiration.
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On Tuesday, April 18, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
I feel at home with your words they rebound off of me and make me feel someone elses pain and that's just fantastic
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On Saturday, April 15, 2006, Equinox Asylum
(140) wrote:
Fantastic write here. Reminds me of some of my own. A fav.
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On Saturday, April 15, 2006, Hello Dead Kitty
(29) wrote:
Does putting words to your feelings help them be less troubled? Sometimes mine do, not always. Loved this piece...great movement between each verse
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