A Day Closer

By caustic ink

As a new sun rises,
Another Day begins
One day closer to someday
One day closer to bliss
Yesterdays were spent
Seeking redemption
Searching for hapiness
Desiring perfection
Out of nowhere
Into my life
Comes an angel
My life saver
My redeemer
My heart now is full
Of love
Of passion
Of blissful contentment
She gives me so much
Yet receives very little
Her day will come
She will get what she deserves
...Endless Pleasure
Sometimes someday seems so far away
But never so far
That it isn't worth waiting for.
Until that day comes
I still have my dreams
Dreams of an angel
To get me through the night
Til the next day's sun rises
And it's another day closer to

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© 2006 caustic ink
Published on Tuesday, April 11, 2006.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Absolutely beautiful.

  • Cattarax On Thursday, May 4, 2006, Cattarax (152)By person wrote:

    WOW .... just breath taking ... I read this twice excellent work kepp it up

  • NikesRain On Tuesday, April 11, 2006, NikesRain (1337)By person wrote:

    so full of tenderness, devotion and gentle sighs, touched with a bit of aching... it's beautifu... almost as much as your heart and spirit.. i hope your someday doesn't take very long to happen.... *hugs* love you

  • NikesRain On Wednesday, April 12, 2006, NikesRain (1337)By person wrote:

    ok last time and then i'll leave this alone.... i'm still sighing at this.... thank you for indulging my 'nudging' to get you to write more often

  • NikesRain On Tuesday, April 11, 2006, NikesRain (1337)By person wrote:

    my gods hun this is so....*sigh*... i'm caught for the words to do this justice atm... i need to come back when i can breathe ... k*t *falls over*

  • elisa On Tuesday, April 11, 2006, elisa (1646)By person wrote:

    a real test of patience.........a fingertip tease away...... but what do i know... ....a beautiful write

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