The Valley Of Dark Poetry Revisited

By shadowsinthelight

Warning, this is a long one! I have taken over 500 Dark Poetry screen names and worked them in this piece. I tried to use as few "outside" words as possible.

Some of the hidden names to search for are
elisa, esau, alanarchy and stuart pid.
new hidden additions; ainsof, thelastdragon and lynaes
You must be familiar with Bast to find that reference.
One northern poet's three incarnations were used in one string.
One name was referred to nine times; which one? (oops, 10)
The answers are after the list of names used at the end of the poem.


You can find me here most anidayz, a dark restless wanderer,

a deception unto myself, taking one of my many walks

through this in defined void of a cyber space sanctuary.

Around 1:59 I sample my favorite spiritus frumenti

with a prozak chaser, then smoke a bowl of redbudyz, Mgood

and consume some gothic black dark fairy mushrooms, yum.

Sorry, but I must become numb inside

in order to prepare for the déjà vu mind rape of suicidal poets

with their bloody razors and lexicon noose(s).


The whispering willow whispers in the night,

who am I, a drifter, a brain dead silent street poet

or just a broken hearted dreamer with a broken dark old soul?

Am I a silent stalking one

who too often holds my velvet/raven/ton/gue

or just no one special?

How do I explain my manifested sorrow,

this eternal despair in seeking nirvana and solace

through the torn beauty of an elegant kiss of death?


It is always suicide season in the chasm,

where azure blue skies/ are self /denied.

Where frozen savannah’s tropical snowstorms

bring Nike’s recycled mercy rains

to wash away bitter sweet crimson tears,

the liquid emotion of forgotten life.

Here darkness rides a white horse

but cannot dim the subtle incandescence of a slow burn star

illuminating a fallen angel with scabbed, shredded jaded wings.


DEATH


We cast our caustic ink testaments into the void.

In this cold blood theory of dark reality,

our shadows are revealed in the light.

Cre/ations left for the judgments of unbound gods

and purr verse bound feline goddesses

in hope of receiving some deliverance

from the evil and the darkness within

our blacken/ed hearts.


IS


The mis/anth/ropic brutality

of some ill spoken, short and pretentious words,

reveal the sheath of twisted vanity mood swings

behind the ashrain drops of hate that at times

drift with the storm fury of instant insanity through this loserland.

Their perfection poisoned

by the sweet ambrosia innocence of sentient ignorance.

Egos are the dark/est light of all.

It is time for a surreality check for those pointless petulant paragons

who swing the hammer in their glass houses.

The dark reality,

no one at all means jackshit to a dead horse’s rotten corpse.


ETERNAL


The silent screams of lost moody souls,

“I am hated”,

echo through S.aint R.eaper Parke

where wilted black roses and twisted midnight orchids

rise like Phoenixes

through the Seraphim shadow of the goodnight moon.

The tainted railway butterfly sips

of the Bella Donna nightshade’s vision of poison.

Next to a bleeding fallen tree,

an eyeless blinded tiger grooms the fluffy pink dancing monkey.

The heretic bard performs blasphemy,

a catastrophic symphony

of incomplete pieces and story time plot twists,

a MELvinOliverDRAUMA, in this revolting theater of dark poetry.

These mystic ventures form into a metal lullaby,

a dark melody of a sleepwalker’s derelict dream not wanted

and beyond this morbid spontaneous insanity,

we are so close yet far from serenity, infinity and eternity.


Are we lost sheep or

merely lab rats running through the red haze of the midnight blaze,

and violet flames of unbridled pain.

Carpe diem Jane.

What of love and fate, a philosophy of hate and fallen faith?


ANARCHY



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Dug down into my own black hole,

a forever cold scared alone soul

with a screaming shattered blackened heart of stone

and crimson scars of stupid art

will be kept hidden in the dark

‘til death do us part.


As I savor the explicit taste of your neurotic stain,

can you feel my infection with your insipid touch?


Poetic bloody black tears of hate

drip like lost luck and sweet corruption

from the raven blade of the blacked robed mage,

a prophet of pain, a skeleton on display beyond winter’s grave.

Yes, to find eternal peace from the cruelty of flesh,

the dead run away.


“We held hands at the end of the world”,

the bloody echo of miss matched hearts,

the anticipation of redemption

from the blood stained oppression of empty love.


Shall I offer to your dying angel eyes a gentleman’s promise?

But, paper flower promises are gracefully torn and broken.

I see in those hopeless despairing eyes, aurora light,

against the starless crest fallen filter sky

of autumn’s October death.


Still the brain worm/s of lost, dazed and confused souls

lead to the evisceration of innocence.

The smeared make-up belies the empty remains

of crystal tears fallen from a crying banshee.

How pointless,

a so called s/urv/I/v/o/r cutting for freedom from death

usually leads to the city morgue,

where there are only lost and forgotten shadows in the night.


Do you feel like a nail/ed bunny,

broken and stripped, crossed and bound

forever paying the pennance for your dark desires.

If all else fails, no one can blame you if you wish upon a star

for it could be your one last chance to avoid that dark whisper

which utters in unspoken words, die quietly, shhh.


When those lethal ideas have returned and darkness beckons,

in your thought of thoughts, you know it is forbidden

to raze the bridge of life with your dark fires.

There is neither blissful tragedy nor beautiful calamity

bought with/the/blood of dead poets from a running vein.

There is a deeper image of you.

In what seems like a forever rain and eternal despair,

there is light in the dark.

No one likes a sad and reminded ghost.


I am so tired

born sleepy

stuck in neutral

just road-kill

a chameleon caught in charlotte’s web

a lifeless dark poet’s one last breath

or it could just be

mononucleosis


When, upon this shipwreck of urban humility,

darkness descends on nightwing/s with its deadly embrace,

will you drea/M like Ophelia-

-drowning in her tainted, love is suicide, tears?

Or

under the twilight night sky,

with your serotonin lost in emotion,

will you offer a precise darkened prayer

to your own december nightmare evil deity,

concerning your final destiny?



We are caught between good and evil,

poetic hellion/s facing the choice

between the thorn and the twisted rose.

Adam and his own nightly sin angel, Midsummer’s Eve,

(little know fact, Eve was her middle name)

chose to listen to the serpentine fire of the dark angel,

the scavenger of unforgiven souls, the hell send Eden’s cancer.


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Sometimes I feel like I’m Alice in wonderland,

(Hysteria, in so far as I can tell,

is simply imperfect Zen to a disturbed mind)

where the magic hatter spins his tangle box tales

of crimson Mr. Kings and vengeful crimson queens.

(Beauty is murder to that lovely silent assassin,
cold hearted biatch)

The mad poet articulated to me in dark epiphany

and still born empathy; “I speak secret truths.

You are lost in the nexus of k/nowhere, empty man.

There is no independence in solitude.”



Yes, my biggest mistake was to believe my own truthful lies.

That I am the one and lonely, a lone dark wolf

with a one fanged vision of narcissistic intelligence

vindicated untouchable in my bold solitude and beautiful scar armour.

No trespassing signs are staked into my emotionless heart of stone.

Love is overrated, deprived of reason, a double edged sword,

a reoccurring living death sentence to the tender fairy tale heart

and to that higher chaos theory, I swore never more, until. . .



AHHH, It’s a dandy life being happily depressed and board out of my skull

but, I doubt suicide is my answer to this darkness in my heart

nor to the distraught memories of my twisted metal yesterdays.

I am simply me, no 1 special in this dark version of hushed sanity.

Would somebody just shoot me in the face, please just kill me.

A lip service prayer to a wilted god o/ugh/t to save me

from wandering with Faust beneath a gray brimstone sky,

lost forever in despair in the seventh circle,

where the bell of hell rings its maleficent poison

unto the tormented and tortured souls of others eternally damned.



Like those three sentient saints, who hiccup(s) their mute serenade

as they pluck melted petals from a tragic sunflower girl in the box,

“We need some vodka, opium and latex dreams”

“Remember the fallen in scarlet memories”

“The dead and gone’s blood and tears water the seed”

“We need some vodka, opium and latex dreams”

Repeat everlastingly



I would sigh on Sunday, but it is always Tuesday

I am going to cry now and fill the emptiness inside me with silent tears.



Damn, what I need is a cemetery lap dance from a caramel ninja stripper,

a bit of the ‘ol physical graffiti.

Mr. Wiggles and his jellybean/s would like that.

Ok, Ok, I know I am a swamp pig (so skeevy)

with a lurid lust phantasy for a swamp dancer.

If that is something evil then give the credit to my double helix.



Far too many years lie in between myself

and the randomly beautiful scent of a Mistress shadow queen,

a solitary dreamer, a tiny sleeper dreaming her river dreams

of rain in the willows and torn paper dolls with tarnished halos.

Not enough miles between to avoid

the silent enigma of a poetry goddess’

poetic mind blow of blue spikes of furious ice

stabbing my hex/ed and vexed dusty lost heart

like frostbite daggers in the dark.

She needs to be loved by a miracle

and my belo degraca is I’m not that one guy.


(the sadistic poet and the masochistic poet should hook up)



The future of my despond is now.

No, I am not afraid nor do I feel grim sorrow,

but am pretty vacant with endifference.

I'm forever cold with fear of luv’s strange injected virus.

Hence I am just a wounded mannequin, designed by death,

an alone ambivalent fool, dead inside and out

in/sanely reaching for paper cliché stars,

which came falling through a w/hole in the night sky.


Star light, star bright, who will burn in my stars tonight?



As I take the last drag on my remaining emerald grace,

the scarlet sunset whispers a terrible truth.

There is a storm comin’, a painful descent towards my undecided fate.

I know I will take possession and the full blame for my own demise.

All these slander/ous tangent ponderings will be my exodus eulogy.



A singer of the night, the lyrical shadow rapture

whisper/s the song of the blackbird,

I, myself, choose to sing along;

“We need some vodka, opium and latex dreams”

“Remember. . .”




The End ?


As of 7/18/06 the numbers of names used is over 500




Again, Thank you to everyone who helped and inspired.

Approximate list of names used;

2615>a restless wanderer
10443>A Skeleton on Display
2076>A Velvet Tongue
82>adreamnotwanted
7512>agentlemenspromise
3472>Alanarchy
5670>Angel With The Scabbed Wings
1810>angel_eyes
7985>AniDayz
5142>anth
1854>ashrain
1151>Aurora_Light
780>autumn
10477>AzureBlue
9780>a_deception_unto_myself
415>bakkhus unbound
87>Bast
7182>BeautifulCalamity
5464>BellaDonna
9104>Beyondthegrave
4455>Blacken_Heart
2412>BlackRobedMage
9007>BlackRose13
10404>BlackRoses
7914>Bleeding Tree
7066>Blinded_Tiger
10406>Blissful Tragedy
8243>blood stained oppression
66>BloodyRazor
7866>blueskiesdenied
10544>Born-sleepy
1856>boughtwithblood
5478>boundandfallen
1677>braindeadpoet
1014>braindead_poet
9889>Bridge
7514>Broken Hearted Dreamer
10525>brokensoul
10577>brutality
6799>Butterfly
4118>capt_funguy
2367>CarpeDiemJane
7911>caustic ink
167>Chameleon
31>CharlottesWeb
9305>Close Yet Far
108>ColdScaredAlone
385>cre
12>CrestFallenSky
10486>crimsonscars
10451>CrimsonTears666
6976>crimson_tears
8670>CrOsSeD N BoUnD
139>Crying_Banshee
175>Crystal_Tears
8622>Cutting_for_Freedom
2296>Dancing_Monkey
6529>DarkDesire
9022>darkdesires
5296>DarkFairy
10416>darklight
10587>Darknes Rides
10496>darkness beckons114
8602>Darkness within
32>darkness_descends
1>DarkPoet
8703>DarkReality
6248>darksidemonopoly
8566>DarkSoul
2045>DazedAndConfused
6302>Deadly Embrace
5355>Death
1472>death_is_eternal
6804>december
4114>Deja vu
7522>Derelict Dream
4608>Despairing Eyes
10569>Die_Quietly_Shhh
9853>doll on the rag
2451>Drea
10493>Drift
2920>Drifter
8450>dropsofhate
9685>Elegant Kiss
6525>elisa
8186>empty_love
68>empty_remains
2415>eternal despair
4068>Evil
8344>explain my sorrow
10402>ExpliciTaste
10400>Eyeless
8675>Fallen
7085>FallenFaith
2136>finaldestiny
5507>forbidden
10471>Forgotten Life
10407>ForgottenShadow
7743>frozen
634>Fury
3130>ghost
5990>glasshouse
7300>Goodnight_Moon
8>GothicBlack
5218>gracefullytorn
1231>hate_doll
5363>Heart of Stone
3697>hopeless
3870>Ideas
6333>illspokenwords
5998>indefined
4761>innocence
9822>InsipidTouch
81>jackshit
3796>Jadedwings
10468>Kept_InThe_Dark
2884>kissofdeath
8810>Lab Rat
10512>Lethal
5390>Lexicon
5351>Lifeless
349>liquid_emotion
2948>Loserland
10421>lostSoul
7805>lost_moody_soul
100>lost_sheep
3219>Lost_Soul
2720>Lydia Jade/coldbloodtheory
10508>manifested sorrow
40>manywalks
6910>MelvinOliverDrauma
33>MercyRain
8783>Metal_Lullaby
363>MGood
4880>Midnight Orchid
1045>Midnight Phoenix
7196>Midnight Seraphim
5472>Midnight Shadow
9327>MidniteBlaze
45>MindRape
7695>mismatchedhearts
5911>missanthropic
10415>mononucleosis
2309>Moodswing
10599>morbid_insanity
6540>mysticventures
10107>Nail Bunny
2509>Nightmare
1605>Nightmare_Evil
4525>nightshade
2541>Nightwing
10323>night_sky
6117>NikesRain
9762>no one at all
2550>NoOneSpecial
10528>Noose
9509>NumbInside
8558>October Death
2491>OLd SouL
159>OneFiveNine
9242>onelastbreath
1865>Ophelia
1037>OpheliaDrowning
10067>paperflowers
1227>PaperPromises
80>Pennance
8247>Petulant Paragon
8113>PhilosophyOfHate
10203>PoeticHellion
539>poetic_blood
4739>PointlessX
9285>Poisoned Perfection
10542>Precise
8165>Prozak
3441>purr_verse
2636>questionmark
5884>Railway_Butterfly
1050>Raven
637>Ravenblade
1036>Raze
190>Recycled
7701>Redbudyz
2740>red_haze
7122>Revolting Theatre
6758>Roadkill
10463>rotten_corpse
3501>RunningVein
97>S R Parke
930>sad_&_reminded
1061>Saint_Reaper
102>Sanctuary
5941>Savannah
1352>SeekingNirvana
9899>Sentient Ignorance
9165>Serenity
9322>serotonin lost
10>shadowsinthelight
4964>shortandpretentious
10589>Shredded
2772>SilentStalker
85>Silent_Poet
1603>silent_screams
7452>sIo
98>Six-Out
6924>Sleepwalker
130>slow.burn.star
9792>smearedXmakeup
4084>Smoke_A_Bowl
3510>Solace
2856>Spiritus_Frumenti
261>spontaneous_insanity
10464>Starless
3185>Storm
8713>StoryTime
2957>streetpoet
494>StrippedAndBroken
7088>stuart_pid
9488>stuckinneutral_09
3811>subtle incandescence
3795>suicideseason
6807>SurrealityCheck
3812>sweetambrosia
8091>swing_the_hammer
10489>TantedLove
346>Testament
10147>The Bard of Blasphemy
7374>The End
2418>The Fallen Angel
25>thecitymorgue
10572>TheCrueltyOfFlesh
10598>TheDarkestLightOfAll
10526>theLyricalshadow
10010>Thorn
7595>ThoughtsOthoughts
7383>Till_Death_Do_Us_Part
10529>to a dead horse
7213>torn_beauty
6602>toy soldier
237>TropicalSnowstorm
1279>Twilight
336>TWISTED
10432>Twisted Sheath
2504>Twisted Vanity
2199>Unbridled Pain
2474>Urban Shipwreck
17>urbanhumility
19>Velvet_Raventon
6440>violetflames
7407>void
10159>VoodooDoll
6119>weheldhandsattheendoftheworld
5947>Whisper
5508>whispering_willow
3468>whispers in the night
7929>WhiteHorse
7852>WhoIAM
114>whort_diddy
1139>wilted
3052>WinterGrave
3921>Wish Upon A Star
2341>worm
8562>XTwistedOrchidX
10650 Esau
10745 lostinemotion
10746 dugdownintomyownblackhole
10752 infinity and eternity
10753 dark_whisper
10761 returned
10765 iamhated
10766 thedeadrunaway
10775 Prophet of Pain
10776 FallenTree
10793 Feel My Infection
10801 dark melody
10808 Twisted Rose
10809 If all else fails
10811 dazednconfused
10818 NoOneCanBlameYou
10822 song_of_the_blackbird
10823 Plot-Twist
10833 survivor
10839 Vision Of Poison
10852 onelastchance
10861 caughtbetweengoodandevil
10869 Heretic
10874 filtersky
10881 Darkened Prayer
10912 Eternal peace
10959 bloodyecho
10961 Deity
10964 deeperimage
10972 hiddeninthedark
10981 lost and confused
10984 broken
10992 Lost
11000 light in the dark
11004 dark fairy
11009 catastophicsymphony
11046 confused
11049 forever_rain
11050 Love-And-Fate
11052 incompletepieces
11054 gothicfairyshrooms
11058 Pins and Needles
11063 TaintedButterfly
11069 fluffy_pink_monkey
11076 NeuroticStain
11077 DarkFairy33322
11078 darkfires
11082 Love_is_suicide
10655 Black tears of hate
12265 Lucklost
11221 Echo
11399 Redemption
12484 Sweetcoruption
11949 Dying Angel
12599 Shadow Rapture

the newest used 7/18/06
11 nell
20 Helix
47 coldwithfear
70 Tragicflower
112 Godot
168 V
252 Wounded
382 serpentine_fire
596 darkepiphany
708 alone
989 Chef De Death
1505 SeventhCircle
1520 The_Scavenger
1838 Forever Cold
2065 shootme
2402 Spikes_of_Blue
2621 HeLlSeND
2756 TheSi|entEnigma
2903 xburninmystarsx
2973 Mistress Shadow
3221 Emptyness Inside Me
3245 xsilent_tearsx
3247 Exodus
3479 frost bite
3600 Mr King
3787 TornPaperDoll
3842 TheMadPoet
3928 Endifference
3971 Tangent Ponderings
4248 no_independence
4337 DeathSentance
4523 LoneWolf
4527 xXxEmotionlessxXx
4530 alwaystuesday
4637 Mute Serenade
4654 physicalgraffiti
4738 BoldSolitude
4740 Lynaes
4774 wonderlandhysteria
4812 ONEANDLONELY
4829 one-fanged vision
4918 instant_insanity
5118 just shoot me in the face
5132 darkangelXlll
5238 SkyCameFalling
5266 Cateye
5272 lollipoplips
5296 Beautiful Scars
5363 Heart of Stone
5590 so_skeevy
5770 AHHH
5933 Rain In The Willows/Malice in wonderland
5934 Simply Me
5947 Truthful Lies
6002 TheLastDragon 6432 poetry_goddess87
6437 Vindicated_untouchable
6681 emeraldgrace
6755 DarkWolf
6761 GirlintheBox
6976 Simply Imperfect
7374 Saint Sentient
7658 Stormcomin
7685 Full blame
7790 Vexed
7800 NeverMore
7821 happilydepressed
7916 Im_going_to_cry_now
7942 strange_luv
8032 Silent Assassin
8066 The Crimson Queen
8165 chaos
8243 Cliché/Paper Stars
8299 Empathy
8326 DeprivedOfReason
8573 LovelyAssassinx
8615 GraySky
8810 Slander(lab rat)
8950 Three
9104 etarnally damnd
9122 tormentedsoul666
9154 StarBright
9214 Grim_Sorrow
9242 Faust
9267 Ambivalent Fool
9305 Yesterday/Distraughtmemory
9408 PoeticMindBlow
9538 No Trespassing
10057 sunflower girl
10066 MidSummers Eve
10127 Tangle Box Tales
10323 night_sky
10309 LostInDespair
10390 Possesion
10579 tortured_soul
10620 SunsetWhispers
10659 aldldl/Adam
10663 riverdreams
10767 Swamp Pig
10786 Sigh on Sunday
10914 veingo
11073 coldheartedbiatch
11171 Ainsof
11205 LovesInjecedVirus
11290 Solitary Dreamer
11314 cemetarydance
11436 hex
11467 belo desgraca
11765 MrWiggles_np
11880 meltingpetal
11920 dead_inside
11925 hushed sanity
12053 Remember_The_Fallen
12076 caramelninjastripper
12127 Nightlysinangel
12209 knowhereman
12224 The Crimson King
12292 Nexus
12396 mindless
12431 insideout
12545 theemptyman
12952 thefairytaleheart
12958 edenscancer
13051 darkversion
13096 maleficent
13120 Singer Of The Night
13127 SomethingWicked
13128 Zen
13132 higher theory
13133 xxTwistedxMetalxx
13135 NoXimXnotXafraid
13149 BellofHell
13159 DisturbedMind
13164 tormented_soul
13169 No1special
13172 beautyismurder
13174 NarcissisticIntel
13180 Magic Hatter
13181 biggestmistake
13186 Vengeful
13192 Pleasejustkillme
13201 jellybean
13207 ispeakasecrettruth
13209 Mannequin
13216 Poison
13223 My_own_demise
13224 Water
13225 scent of a shadow
13235 wholeinthesky
13236 A Tender Heart
13239 A lip Service prayer
13242 tarnished-halo
13245 dagger_in_the_dark
13247 lostforever
13256 VoDKa
13265 xMasochisticxPoetx
13266 Armour
13271 Scarlet_Memories
13274 unforgiven soul
13275 latexdreams
13281 hiccups
13296 ShadowQueen
13297 tormented soul
13302 deadandgone
13306 FuriousIce
13308 Opium
13312 theSeed
13313 solitude
13315 stillborn
13316 WeNeedSomeVodka
13321 darkangel
13327 LivingDeath
13335 reacurring_death
13336 painfuldescent
13337 SwampDancer
13346 tinysleeper
13350 Brimstone
13360 lost
13363 Suicide_Is_My_Answer
13365 darkness_in_my_heart
13373 Randomly Beautiful
13375 Lurid Lust Phantasy
13377 love_is_overrated
13383 Silence
13401 dandylife
13405 sadisticpoet
13406 boardoutofmyskull
13409 bloodandtears
13414 Scarlet Whisper
13415 myeuology
13417 doubleedgedsword
13426 Hence I am
13427 reachingforsky
13429 Designed By Death
13433 that one guy
13442 UnDeCiDeDFaTe
13443 Lost Heart
13446 wiltedgod666
13453 Terrible Truth

where to find hidden names;

ALANARCHY; Death is etern/AL ANARCHY

ELISA; Shall I offer to your dying ang/EL EYES A/ gentleman’s promise?

ESAU; I see in those hopeless despairing ey/ES, AU/rora light

STUART PID, (an anagram); and crimson scars of STUPID ART

AINSOF; Hysteri/A, IN SO F/ar as I can tell,

LYNAES, (an anagram); in/SANELY/ reaching for paper cliché stars,

THELASTDRAGON; As I take /THE LAST DRAG ON/ my remaining emerald grace,

QUESTIONMARK (?) is the most referred to

KEFKA is the northern poet #346 TESTAMENT, JUDGEMENT, DELIVERENCE

BAST is bound feline goddess







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© 2006 shadowsinthelight
Published on Monday, April 10, 2006.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"
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  • Loserland On Wednesday, November 4, 2015, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    Wow, amazing concept and terrific write. I never knew this existed. Thanks for including me, I'm honored!!

  • nick89nc On Sunday, February 16, 2014, nick89nc (6)By person wrote:

    ok, I just found my absolute favorite poem. This is perfection in its purest. This deserves more praise than what I am capable of putting into words.

  • sIo On Tuesday, December 3, 2013, sIo (886)By person wrote:

    for some odd reason i feel like i just keep reading this and it just keeps getting LONGER. its like....the Bermuda labyrinth. :+)

  • Daughter_Of_The_Moon On Friday, September 26, 2008, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (114)By person wrote:

    You have touched the hearts of many here. It makes me happy to see so many names from a long time ago, and be able to laugh at the many ways you've put them together, then grin at the others. So many emotions in one place, for so many people. You have talent more than any of us here could praise you for. Thank you! -Heather-

  • MESUN On Saturday, June 9, 2007, MESUN (232)By person wrote:

    what a bittersweet thing that I read this now. Bitter only in the fact that I have not read it sooner. After the first walk through the valley I was amazed.

  • MESUN On Saturday, June 9, 2007, MESUN (232)By person wrote:

    Now I am honored and grateful to find myself cast among the attractions of this beautiful world of words, amidst the countless others for which I dare not even hold a candle against. I am astonished by your ability.

  • MESUN On Saturday, June 9, 2007, MESUN (232)By person wrote:

    Thank you from the deepest black pit of my heart.

  • DarkDruidess On Thursday, April 19, 2007, DarkDruidess (357)By person wrote:

    nice...this takes me years back...So many members, so many memories. Thank you for reminding that there are so many people from DP that has touched me.

  • l mo On Tuesday, January 2, 2007, l mo (55)By person wrote:

    beautiful. beautiful. beautiful. beautiful. beautiful. ~lisa

  • mysticventures On Thursday, December 28, 2006, mysticventures (484)By person wrote:

    Pure Brilliance :)

  • A former member wrote: wow..that's..amazing...

  • Malice In Wonderland On Tuesday, December 26, 2006, Malice In Wonderland (1023)By person wrote:

    yay. Scholar

  • Adam On Sunday, December 24, 2006, Adam (250)By person wrote:

    When I was helping you I never expected all this. wow. Nice stuff! Scholar

  • Drifter On Sunday, December 24, 2006, Drifter (277)By person wrote:

    Oh yay i see my name! :) Nice write, and a cool idea to boot.

  • A former member wrote: *sits cross-legged on the dp beach* I love scurrying through the hopes and dreams darkly tucked away in this non place of such mind numbing pain and glory.... chewing on tid bits of reflection it is just like finding an old photo album in some forgotten a

  • A former member wrote: attic, I get no greater conception of time and the myriad of complexities plaguing and praising human kind than to lose a few hours through these hauntingly seductive and yet often sooo, so cold non halls... excellent tribute, Thanks!

  • A former member wrote: Very, very clever. ....-samone

  • CharlottesWeb On Sunday, November 19, 2006, CharlottesWeb (521)By person wrote:

    I do not know what to say about this...it took a realy, realy long time to read...a realy long time to read! And if it hadn't of been good, I'd of bopped you on the head with my voo doo stick! I'll have to reread it again...

  • CharlottesWeb On Sunday, November 19, 2006, CharlottesWeb (521)By person wrote:

    just to try and understand a few more of the meanings laced into every damned line...jebus but this is good...and creative...you realy made this with love and it shows...and I think I love it.

  • A former member wrote: DAMN, THAT IS SOOOOOO LONG!!!

  • A former member wrote: Where Am I at?

  • The Crimson Queen On Friday, August 25, 2006, The Crimson Queen (928)By person wrote:

    *Applauds* Your creativity never ceases to amaze with this project. Well Done.

  • sIo On Monday, August 21, 2006, sIo (886)By person wrote:

    whoa.

  • veingo On Friday, July 28, 2006, veingo (556)By person wrote:

    I'm a musical interlude! :D- But seriously, The work you put into this shows your love & respect for this site, & it's members. Much respect. ^V^

  • NikesRain On Friday, July 28, 2006, NikesRain (1343)By person wrote:

    astounding and a each revision just boggles the mind at your talent.... outstanding job

  • Mistress Shadow On Friday, July 21, 2006, Mistress Shadow (253)By person wrote:

    Excellent as always, and of course, it out preforms the ones before. ~T

  • A former member wrote: Ahahaha...I swear, the more you add to this piece, the better it becomes. This is ten times better than the last one, and I'm sure it's bound to get even more so with the next additions to it. Wonderful job. ~*Beth*~

  • A former member wrote: Brilliant concept, a fascinating epic, and really funny too.. actually made me laugh, it's sort of random, sarcastic, kinda like a parody, picks up effectively on characteristics, well done, you must be exhausted.

  • A former member wrote: This was a beautiful dedication to the members of this sight. It's really nice to be a part of something that has meaning and is understood by so many waging our war on empty pages for this unseen army's crusade to be heard and to share.

  • A former member wrote: I could die happy in this valley knowing i'm not alone, none of us are. Thank you you crazy-brilliant bastard

  • Sin On Tuesday, June 13, 2006, Sin (1179)By person wrote:

    i love this and am humbled to be a part of it, thank you ~kristy

  • blue On Monday, May 29, 2006, blue (1458)By person wrote:

    This is just too much!! You rock! ~b

  • AniDayz On Sunday, May 7, 2006, AniDayz (822)By person wrote:

    ...i am still re-reading and re-reading more-through this masterpiece...with my tongue hanging out...

  • elisa On Monday, April 24, 2006, elisa (1642)By person wrote:

    *smiles*..... i've never hid in a poem before...... this is like....... unfolding a singular ...layer by layer.....i love it.... i'm off to read it again....

  • A former member wrote: I hardley know what to say.....i read this and wonder. Is it truely possible people to completely see every hidden meaning you meant.....This is astounding a true Rembrant of poetry.

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Saturday, April 22, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy (365)By person wrote:

    wow, what an epic. there's too many to think about at once! it made my head hurt.

  • PoeticHellion On Wednesday, April 12, 2006, PoeticHellion (192)By person wrote:

    For this, I think you should get an automatic upgrade. YOU ARE A GENIUS!!

  • SilentStalker On Monday, April 10, 2006, SilentStalker (1091)By person wrote:

    ...this is probably why no one else could do a write like it; chances are, no one else knows quite how to twist words together like that... Scholar

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