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I'm only half
By Kitty_LostInHerOwnMind
I feel like
I'm missing half of me
Like I'm so incomplete
And only half a person
In a world of whole people
We used to be so close
Two psycadelic peas
In one far out pod
I miss my other half
The person that I trusted
With everything I am
And now she won't
Even talk to me
I hope it works out
Because with
My other half
I am half a person
In a world where
You must be whole.
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© 2006 Kitty_LostInHerOwnMind
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On Friday, February 10, 2012, NikesRain
(1298)
wrote:
...an abusive and offensive comment violating the TOS of DP has been removed, as well as a retort to it.
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On Friday, February 10, 2012, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
I'm glad someone was on top of this situation, they were really trying my patience, and that's saying something. I usually don't bite back in such extremities, but I have a low tolerance as of late I suppose, that, or I'm still passionate about this place.
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On Friday, February 10, 2012, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
your response was warranted and I appreciate the fact you said what you did... without the original offensive comment, your reply to it would have been out of place so it was deleted too, not for any other reason
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On Friday, May 5, 2006, waterchica999
(29) wrote:
very nice and true
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On Saturday, April 8, 2006, AHHH
(187) wrote:
lovely.
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