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Can You Feel This?
By CharlottesWeb
The storm turned away
Running from where
We all may lay
While Angels and crows
Called in sick
Flightless
Wearily quiet
The ground rumbled,
Upset and blistered
The day man found
The day they discovered
Even walls grow tired
Of being built
To be beat down
The sun and the moon,
Now step aside
Leaving stragglers,
Lost within this interim
Of fading shades
While the stars
Who knew the cost
Again,
Sigh their tears
For such
Loss
I'm so happy
my poetry has
come back to me
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© 2006 Charlotte Thompson
Published on Monday, April 3, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Can You Feel This?"
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On Monday, January 26, 2009, Ashteroth
(192)
wrote:
Well I think we'll all be glad you're poetry came back, well written will read more.
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On Monday, May 21, 2007, Moonflower
(301) wrote:
this was so beautiful, and i know how ya feel i get writers block alllllll the time, it drives me insane!! so congrats on that;) and a wonderful poem.
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A former member wrote:
I feel it and it is gorgeous
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A former member wrote:
Damn. The flow in this was awsome. The words themselves astounding. The last three lines thrilling to me because eye heart your writing :D Awsome, awsome. ~Ryan
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On Thursday, April 6, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
I am so happy to see new pieces from u!These new ones r fantastic!Definitely worth the wait!Ciao,Steve
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On Wednesday, April 5, 2006, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
*bows* your way with words has been missed and this poem makes the reason so clear. you speak in such a meaningful way that i can not even think of a worthy complement
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A former member wrote:
*is also glad it came back* :) I should leave a wonderfully constructive comment..or at least a wonderfully creative one..but I'm just going to say gorgeous and leave it at that.
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On Monday, April 3, 2006, antiScripsony
(30) wrote:
Calmly and pleasantly blunt. You're winner.
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