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-+- dragonflies humming in attics II -+-
By NikesRain
*this was reworked from memory, the original being lost due to technical
difficulties. it is a bit different but still written from the same heart*
she whispers elegance into the room
gentle breaths kept delicate in the shadows
to touch that which is made of beauty
echoing from lips made soft by the rain
heartbeats found in the spaces of hidden walls
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she stumbles over violet orchid tenderness
tripping on candlelit sighs cradling wishes
spilling dreams into stardust heart shaped boxes
its so hard to keep hidden in the soul of a cloud
slipping through to fall as tears from the sky
~+~
she sings quietly bent low to the floorboards
slowly rocking within precious fallen moments
flowing sweet with forgotten gentleness
breathing in folded origami butterflies
hands shining with paper cut snowflakes
~+~
she whispers into a silent room
and the storm outside covers the sound
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© 2006 drdavis
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On Monday, August 12, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(275)
wrote:
This is beautiful, the picture you create is breathtaking.. Great write :)
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A former member wrote:
such tenderness should never go without reward.... truly a poem of the day.... but timelessly so.... a poem for every day...... written by a poetess of tenderness.... beyond the realm of tangible..... *bows before victorious rain*
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A former member wrote:
this is as gorgeous as the most beautiful of dreams..softly whispering tenderly, as the beauty increases and increases..i read this the first time it was posted, and this is just as lovely as the orignal.
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A former member wrote:
wow...i'm sorta embarrassed. I'm left w/o the words to say what this made me feel, but i can't read it w/o saying something to you. It's beyond powerful imagery. It's down right tangible....Much Respect ~MR~
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A former member wrote:
Truelly left on the edge of my seat teeter-tottering in a fluid balance of tranquility. loved the first verse the most. Wonderful.
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On Friday, March 10, 2006, manywalks
(750) wrote:
This is the definition of elegance and beauty; supurb. ~ wen
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A former member wrote:
"its so hard to keep hidden in the soul of a cloud" Wow. For some reason this line just blows me away and stands out from the rest. Like drinking liquid with a crazy straw. Awsome. ~Ryan
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On Friday, March 10, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Gorgous. I found myself under the snow in a stupor, and I was warm with wonder. I may be frozen in my astonishment. Great work. And the script was a great little bump.
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A former member wrote:
*heartsigh*
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On Friday, March 10, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
Oh my the ending was just so perfect! Sheer beauty & elegance wrapped in such soft rose petal like imagery. *Bravo* Julia~
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A former member wrote:
god-speed the messenger through crying skies...a saving murmer caresses life in the hollows of a most turbulent, impending demise...you are truly blessed, and I thank you for your grace
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A former member wrote:
Wow.....so beautiful and soft and again so cold and full of tension.....
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On Friday, March 10, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
a soft still sound drifting through a hidden passage..... of a world build out of beauty.... unseen..... but felt.... and dreamt about in great length..... a beautiful recovery....
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