Watch the rain

By XxSinkingDarknessxX

watching the rain fall
form the tears that cover my eyes
as you walk away form me
a deep sigh, as i turn
closing my eyes
i think........
of all the memories that we have;
that are now lost in abyss of hopelessness
i look back at you one more time
hoping that you'll be looking at me
staring at your back
another tear falls down my face
it's getting hard to breath
i turn again and watch you walk away
the rain starts to poor
i stand soaked; crying
my love has gone away
the world has finally won
i stare at the ground and
think about what i have done
things i said,
the things i didn't mean
the things that hurt,
things that made you cry
that i never ment to say
i never wanted it to end
we never liked to fight

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© 2006 XxSinkingDarknessxX
Published on Wednesday, March 1, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Nimue44 On Thursday, March 12, 2015, Nimue44 (341)By person wrote:

    Wish he didn't walk a step further. Counting the seconds, couting the steps, counting the raindrops- counting everything, hoping that at least that person will turn around. Man, you captured such a moment...

  • A former member wrote: great write, great flow and i can really relate to it i love it and hope to hear more from you

  • Dissolving Poet On Monday, April 10, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    Wow this flowed into my system poisoning my mind with intense beauty

  • blake On Wednesday, March 1, 2006, blake (33)By person wrote:

    great flow and emotively swift. good write.

  • Dissolving Poet On Wednesday, March 1, 2006, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    I agree with Sam on this one....

  • A former member wrote: I know this feeling all too well...regrets, longing,'s all too hard...i appreciate this write...thank you

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