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unseen
By whisperer
wandering in disarray
wondering where it's safe to stay
would it matter anyway
i don't think it could
silence the devil cries as the silence resides inside of me
creating a void that all can see
am i your enemy
would you love me as a friend
the closet animates the dead inside everytime they try to hide within
exchanges death for life unseen
or better yet out of sight redeemed
is this a better me
is this the end
no
sweet demise controls the verbs access lost to find the words that accuratly
convey my reckoning
invariably fails to recognize not everyone else is hypnotized and wondering
where their safety lies inside
i don't know
it could be the devil in you i suppose
because it certainly isn't me
when clocks are used to pass the time you can't help but watch it fly while
you walk past it and help it die with me
what can i say
i'm just unseen
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© 2006 whisperer
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A former member wrote:
.."when clocks are used to pass the time you can't help but watch it fly while you walk past it and help it die with me".. damn, just damn.. I swear, my head is becoming an empty hall for your words to resonate..
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A former member wrote:
I don't know how you do it.. but there's nothing constructive I could say that hasn't already been said.. I think that's why I find it hard to comment.. the sense of finality you convey.. there's no room for anything else.
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A former member wrote:
..and anything I might say just.. comes out misconstrewed or as shallow appreciation.. but it's much deeper than that.. so much deeper.
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