walk with me

By whisperer

venture with me...a thought or two would not go amiss in this




afternoon of golden twilight




walk with me down the this dirt road that is lined with oak trees and stone


just give me a second to kick the corpses out of the way
they were thoughts once




just like you





i walk you down this road to see how long you



my dear thought







live








i've had you since about 2:30 this morning
i like you


you shade my heart




you thought.....of.....things that shall remain unnamed for now







on to other things








what with all the echoes

the footsteps



the coronation



the roses






valentine nothings




she told me the air smelled of fear today
and i couldnt't taste it


maybe i'm used to it





blow me up tom






i'm kinda done with today







come, thought, venture with me





lets pair you with some other thoughts that have made it as far as you have





you have a better chance together






and i have a better chance of moving on









walk with me

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© 2006 whisperer
Published on Wednesday, February 15, 2006.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • vaultgrl On Thursday, February 16, 2006, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    ...like TaintedButterfly said....it's amazing....."she told me the air smelled of fear today"....great write, i love this line....

  • TaintedButterfly On Thursday, February 16, 2006, TaintedButterfly (670)By person wrote:

    I loved every line. Amazing how a simple thought can turn into a wonderful & expressive write! *applauds* Julia~

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Thursday, February 16, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    ...this was quite bizarre

  • A former member wrote: ..you think way too much.

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