walk with me
By whisperer
venture with me...a thought or two would not go amiss in this
afternoon of golden twilight
walk with me down the this dirt road that is lined with oak trees and stone
just give me a second to kick the corpses out of the way
they were thoughts once
just like you
i walk you down this road to see how long you
my dear thought
live
i've had you since about 2:30 this morning
i like you
you shade my heart
you thought.....of.....things that shall remain unnamed for now
on to other things
what with all the echoes
the footsteps
the coronation
the roses
valentine nothings
she told me the air smelled of fear today
and i couldnt't taste it
maybe i'm used to it
blow me up tom
i'm kinda done with today
come, thought, venture with me
lets pair you with some other thoughts that have made it as far as you
have
you have a better chance together
and i have a better chance of moving on
walk with me
Comments on "walk with me"
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On Thursday, February 16, 2006, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
...like TaintedButterfly said....it's amazing....."she told me the air smelled of fear today"....great write, i love this line....
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On Thursday, February 16, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
I loved every line. Amazing how a simple thought can turn into a wonderful & expressive write! *applauds* Julia~
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On Thursday, February 16, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
...this was quite bizarre
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A former member wrote:
..you think way too much.