I hate you but.....

By vaultgrl

……to write about someone I don’t like….I would write….about how much you bite, how you love to glare, and you have such dead hair…how your beauty is hidden by your ugly personality, and your cares are developed around creating others fears……how you speak so much, but all I hear is cant…..how you touch, but the world you do not feel….your ideas are pure…..as pure as those heaven has refused…your thoughts are beautiful….as beautiful as those people you’ve abused…..I hate the way you hurt, the way you act like you don’t care. I hate the way you speak, the way you act like we can’t hear…….but I love you because you say love me…..and I need it to go on…..so I don’t feel so alone when I’m left to my own thoughts….and so I don’t feel so alone when the world abandons me…… mom...will you always tell me that you love me?....

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© 2006 vaultgrl
Published on Tuesday, February 14, 2006.     Filed under: "Rant"
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  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Tuesday, April 25, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    your hate was eloquently worded. i was confused by the last few lines... but then, love and hate are twins separated at birth, and often not so far apart.

  • A former member wrote: I know this....... very well too but sometimes things don't work out and I'm sorry.... I too hope things work out for you...... great write

  • vaultgrl On Friday, February 24, 2006, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    ...thanks....bunches......

  • TaintedButterfly On Tuesday, February 14, 2006, TaintedButterfly (670)By person wrote:

    This is shattering and oh so sad. Wishing you nothing but happiness & joy! Great piece, btw... Julia~

  • vaultgrl On Wednesday, February 15, 2006, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    thank you so much.....

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