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Between the Lines
By Aurora_Light
Words are spoken
Spoken without thought
Thought of without meaning
Not ment when said
Words are open
Open yet unopen
Unheard yet heard
Listend to and forgotten
Words are all this
This and so much more
More to some than to others
Others whose words go unheard
My words were heard
And then influenced
Influenced to a point
A point were I stooped
My words went unspoken
Unspoken and unheard
Yet still I was open
Open to others words
Words can mean so much
So much and still so little
So little that I question
Question each word I hear
For questioning the words is all that is left to this world
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© 2006 Amanda L. Mrozinski
Published on Thursday, January 26, 2006.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Between the Lines"
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A former member wrote:
Oh Wow, I like this. I like the way it catches the former sentence, while making way for the next. Words are a very powerful object. If you have a sharp tongue you can get get just about anything ][ ][
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On Monday, June 5, 2006, CharlottesWeb
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wrote:
For a poet, words are living ideas, that refuse to be meaningless. You are so talented, and your work has taken on a slightly different tone, texture and being...since last I delved into it. I've a strange reaction to this though...it frusterates me.
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On Saturday, February 18, 2006, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
True, and depressing. I came to think about the single sentence "Keep Talking" Pink Floyd still haunt me with it, at times I realy hate that line. I hate it for trying to be simple, and I hate it for breaking the silence.
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On Saturday, February 18, 2006, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
But still it isnt to be dismissed .. This poem isnt to be dismissed either. It is straightforward, honest and realy so truthful that it makes me feel a hypocrite.
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On Saturday, February 18, 2006, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Let me just say that I think you strive for some beautiful goals Light, and that allways shine in your works. Tiger
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On Friday, January 27, 2006, Crimson Shade
(92) wrote:
Thought provoking - riveting stuff... good write, i'd like to see much more of this style of poem... fantastic.
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On Friday, January 27, 2006, darkdesires
(139) wrote:
Wow... this really gripped me hun. Unbelievable and I know exactly how this all feels. You above anyone else know how much I have to hold back... I hope you never feel like this with me though. I mean comon we're freinds. ^_^
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On Friday, January 27, 2006, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
i could never feel that way with you
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A former member wrote:
philosophical...pensive and probing...you certainly have a way with words (pardon the pun...) nice write!!
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