forgotten
By whisperer
sweet mockingbird sing me your cheap mocking words
catch the flak as i implode
please don't forget me
strike me quick, no thats too long and my hearts ticking like a bomb
stuck in the rain
what a song
you might forget me
slow down just a minute and check this wrecking ball
no
just leave me on the floor
counting the steps you take as you tango out my door
flee the scene let me scream
please don't forget me
this is how i come undone, so now here comes the fun
and how did this one on one become only one
please, can you tell me....
strike, set me to light
don't let me fight
because i'll remember
choking on the end, cahlk it up
and let it send me rolling end over end
i cant forget her
tears have stained the floor the same way they've done before today and
in some infectious way
i remember
but the things that come to mind break me down and make me blind
in every way she was too kind
i don't deserve her
i won't forget her
please don't forget me
...
if i am perfect for you then why am i alone again
maybe my imperfection is my perfection and with that infection within detection
this inspection needs correction, to undertake this mistake you need to
let go
let your wish come true
you wished that you had never come into my life
well....that makes me feel a fuck-load better
tears do no good
waiting does little more
but i want to
...no you don't...
yeah, io really think i do
i wish...really wish i knew what the outcome of this was going to be
i think i already do
seeds of doubt have grown and cracked the foundations of us and youre no
longer sure of yourself
so i'll take the shaft and fall to the past
do i seem calm?
it's just an act
as i get a great view of your back
i'm sick of being beat down by this crap
yes it affects me
Comments on "forgotten"
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On Monday, July 13, 2009, tinkdarkchyld
(25) wrote:
~eyes finish the work as a whole then read parts seperatly~ the work is painful to read, but the ache begs to be held close and read until its almost unbareable. sublime.
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On Monday, May 22, 2006, Cattarax
(215) wrote:
This is the first thing that I have read from you .. and I think I am hooked .. nice wording .. and how can you ever forget something that has touched your heart
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On Monday, February 20, 2006, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
ps--good imagry with the mockingbird at the beginning! ~lauren~
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On Monday, February 20, 2006, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
that last line really hit me hard...it's so easy to pretend otherwise...and by the time i realize, well, it's usually too late...i hope you're better at realizing your emotions than i am... ~lauren~
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A former member wrote:
.."if i am perfect for you then why am i alone again maybe my imperfection is my perfection and with that infection within detection this inspection needs correction, to undertake this mistake you need to let go.."
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A former member wrote:
Do you remember when I told you that some of the things you write, they are so fast-paced that if you read them as a whole and at that pace, they're just a masterpieceblur.. but when you take them apart, they become each their own piece of artistic.
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A former member wrote:
..that's what I meant.. I keep steady with your pace.. and when you throw this at me.. it feels like I've been hit, and I have to catch my breath again.. slowing everything down.. it's like putting time on slow motion..
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A former member wrote:
This piece has left me at a loss, since you've posted it.. I weep at the sight of the word tears.. and blink awkwardly at your inquisitions.. it's like a ticket into your mind.. overwhelming.. and just.. almost too much.
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A former member wrote:
..but I come back to it often, for that reason.. and there's a type of inconsistent melody here that strikes me beautiful.. these words play music in my head, and it comes back to me in times of half-awareness.."please don't forget me".. damn.