early morning thoughts

By DarkNephilim

The scars made by cold unfeeling objects fade.
They heal and they dissolve.
The scars that lay deeper underneath the skin rarely heal.
But they're made by the same unfeeling things.

Repitition and soft sounds keep me from my desired thoughts.
The silent stillness of the early hours.
My thoughts race a thousand times over.
How can I not know every detail about you?

Here as I stare and breathe.
When all seems to finally collapse.
Hearing nothing but the ticks and groans of this old house.
My eyes close and I'm submerged in you.

My dreams are my salvation.
I no longer have to think of anything troubling.
I fly over everything that disturbes and annoyes.
And you fly with me, always with me.

Pretty girl... always fly with me.
Escape our fears and forget the people who would hold us back.
Bend and break the limits we put on ourselves.
Distance isn't anything to us, we're forever.

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© 2006 DarkNephilim
Published on Sunday, January 15, 2006.     Filed under: "Non-Fiction" and "Poetry"
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  • Thorn On Thursday, February 16, 2006, Thorn (283)By person wrote:

    I love it. I'd love to see you post more often.

  • A former member wrote: Heal in the escapism from all the pain and darkness. A quality write.

  • Crimson Shade On Sunday, January 15, 2006, Crimson Shade (92)By person wrote:

    The final stanza stands out for me here and there is plenty of emotion throughout this piece. Only thing that it was missing was imagery for me... good write.

  • smearedXmakeup On Sunday, January 15, 2006, smearedXmakeup (19)By person wrote:

    wow honey. wow.... wow. that's all i can say. i love you so much.

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