What is it? is it...

By Adam

Is it love?


I love the way you walk
I love the way you run,
But I wont let myself run away with you

I love your attitude
I love your personality,
But I wont let my self get personal with you

I love the way you sound
I love the way you look,
But I wont even let myself look at you

I love everything about you
But I wont let myself love you

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© 2005 aldldl
Published on Monday, November 28, 2005.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Sunday, June 30, 2019, Jonas Robinson (867)By person wrote:

    Beautiful and easy to relate to.

  • Qurious On Monday, November 9, 2009, Qurious (40)By person wrote:

    yup. been there, done that, doing it NOW. :S thanks adaml

  • Nixx On Friday, September 11, 2009, Nixx (240)By person wrote:

    this holds true to a lot of people. i've been there too. this is a fantastic write.

  • Mari On Saturday, January 26, 2008, Mari (425)By person wrote:

    hm, i think you already do

  • Adam On Tuesday, March 11, 2008, Adam (245)By person wrote:

    I have finally been able to get over this to the point that I can talk, and be human with/around her and not be just struck by her to the point I dont really think about/for myself. Scholar

  • Adam On Tuesday, March 11, 2008, Adam (245)By person wrote:

    God that took a long time to happen. Scholar

  • Darkest_Addiction On Monday, January 2, 2006, Darkest_Addiction (44)By person wrote:

    i agree with kel your a great writer and im not sorry we bullied you into putting them back up :P

  • Forgotten Angel On Thursday, December 29, 2005, Forgotten Angel (310)By person wrote:

    this..is awesome..i've felt this way about a guy b4..but yeah..i never tell him..but adam..this was awesome..i should have you know, your an awesome poet, no matter what ppl say- INCLUDING you..-Kel

  • Adam On Thursday, December 29, 2005, Adam (245)By person wrote:

    well thanks, just so you know you only had to say that once or twice, (i posted them back up cause you and scorp) but you said that on all my works so you must mean it, thanks again, ~Adam Scholar

  • ShardsofSilence On Saturday, December 3, 2005, ShardsofSilence (222)By person wrote:

    the last line should have "won't" instead of "don't" but that's just my opinion ^__^ nonetheless it's still a great write :)

  • Adam On Saturday, December 3, 2005, Adam (245)By person wrote:

    that was a mistake... you are right thanks~ fixed Scholar

  • A former member wrote: yeah...i like this...and i kno a bit on how u feel..just not now :p..and roachy is right..u can turn this into a song Scholar

  • Johny_D_Lewis On Thursday, December 1, 2005, Johny_D_Lewis (467)By person wrote:

    i like, try mixing some 4 to 8 lines in between each section and make into a song you can

  • ShardsofSilence On Saturday, December 3, 2005, ShardsofSilence (222)By person wrote:

    i second er...third? that notion ^__^ lol

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