I
By Darkest_Addiction
i bare my pain in quite shame
and live inside my lie
i spend my time inside my mind
with sins i cannot hide
to find the truth in all the lies
the light in all this dark
this is what i seek to find
and yet from hate i cant escape
the truth is blinded
by the lies
the light is
lost in darkness
and our love is lost
in our hate
will we ever escape
or live forever in this waste?
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© 2005 Erin mae mcavoy
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A former member wrote:
yes! fucking exactly!
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On Sunday, January 22, 2006, Grey Lies
(186) wrote:
such a strong ending...nice write.
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A former member wrote:
This is awsome. such insight, I love it. ~Empty Soul~
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On Friday, November 25, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
there is [much--respectful] insight within this piece. it speaks within the frozen hands of confusion.[yet;this voice, of the heart, is what is need.ed to be attended to and strengthened, to 'melt' the hands of ice...
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On Friday, November 25, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
...a universal force of blindhabit ways which ((binds))-humanity-in [this] society]--to a dark.ness, threading disbelief and disregard for such quiet stillness within--all, and,
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On Friday, November 25, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
..truth be told, truth is there, as is light and love, respect and hope beyond the mind to live as such, is recognizing;first,within self that eternal.ness and thus, bringing that forth.