I

By Darkest_Addiction

i bare my pain in quite shame
and live inside my lie

i spend my time inside my mind
with sins i cannot hide

to find the truth in all the lies
the light in all this dark

this is what i seek to find
and yet from hate i cant escape

the truth is blinded
by the lies

the light is
lost in darkness

and our love is lost
in our hate

will we ever escape
or live forever in this waste?





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© 2005 Erin mae mcavoy
Published on Thursday, November 24, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: yes! fucking exactly!

  • Grey Lies On Sunday, January 22, 2006, Grey Lies (186)By person wrote:

    such a strong ending...nice write.

  • A former member wrote: This is awsome. such insight, I love it. ~Empty Soul~

  • AniDayz On Friday, November 25, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    there is [much--respectful] insight within this piece. it speaks within the frozen hands of confusion.[yet;this voice, of the heart, is what is need.ed to be attended to and strengthened, to 'melt' the hands of ice...

  • AniDayz On Friday, November 25, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    ...a universal force of blindhabit ways which ((binds))-humanity-in [this] society]--to a dark.ness, threading disbelief and disregard for such quiet stillness within--all, and,

  • AniDayz On Friday, November 25, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    ..truth be told, truth is there, as is light and love, respect and hope beyond the mind to live as such, is recognizing;first,within self that eternal.ness and thus, bringing that forth.

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