Some Words You Might Care to Hear

By A Broken Soul

If I wince hard enough
I can recall what you look like
If I try very hard
I can pretend like you’re still here

But it’s hard to hear
How things aren’t going so great
And it’s hard because I
Desperately can relate
Everything is parallel
To the way I’m feeling without you
And it’s hard because I long
To be closer to you

If I scream loud enough
Will you hear me all the way over there?
If I try a little harder
Maybe someday will be sooner than later

But it’s hard to know
Those things aren’t going as planned
And it’s so damn easy
For everything to get out of hand
You’ve got a life that you live
And I’ve got mine that you left
And it’s hard to know
These words might be my last

I’ll just pray that you
Make it another day
Find something to hang onto
And everything can be okay

But it’s hard to show
If I can’t even make it on my own
Without you here…
Life just sometimes seems pointless

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© 2005 Perletti
Published on Thursday, November 3, 2005.     Filed under: "Lyrics"
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  • Myrrhkuri the fallen one On Friday, November 11, 2005, Myrrhkuri the fallen one (94)By person wrote:

    I like this song...it just rings the truth don't it? No one wants to admit things are too hard and oh how easily we lose control...

  • Kitty_LostInHerOwnMind On Thursday, November 10, 2005, Kitty_LostInHerOwnMind (7)By person wrote:

    Wow, now I found another about me. I love you so much and I miss you. I need to write you a poem. Kit

  • A former member wrote: Damn..."Without you here...life just sometimes seems pointless"...I think a lot of people can relate to these emotions, even if they don't want to admit it. I agree with both ErrOr and Soldiers Girl...this hit hard. *Evangel*

  • Err0r On Friday, November 4, 2005, Err0r (365)By person wrote:

    Well this left a sinking feeling in the pit of my stomach, I can agree with Soldier here, but sometimes I like to feel these things- Great job on in envoking such emotion in others. :)

  • Army Barbie On Thursday, November 3, 2005, Army Barbie (324)By person wrote:

    Definatly feelings I know. This hit me too hard to want to stay up tonight. I think after this I may turn in and try to get the emotion this gave me to leave. -Courtney

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