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out of clotting factors
By Jonas
and i've found a new fire in myself
as the doubt melts away
i feel thin like wire
as current alternates through me
and this isn't a sound foundation
but don't touch me
i'm ready to kill
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© 2005 Jonas
Published on Thursday, November 3, 2005.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
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On Friday, November 18, 2005, diavolessa
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wrote:
greatly written, wonderfully concluded.
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On Monday, November 7, 2005, manywalks
(750) wrote:
Hmmmm, this was tasty. ~ wen
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On Monday, November 7, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
I like the feel of this one very much. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
Like a charged breath of new air, this poem is electric, a climatic conclusion.
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