Reality of Children
By vaultgrl
*This is a very rough draft of my personal essay for hnrs english class....like
it or hate it, all comments and criticism welcome....*
I’m against the wall, my hairs all over and I’m holding myself, as
if in defense of an unseen enemy. Despite my involuntary shivering and
the thermostat reading 60 degrees, I feel like I’m in the middle of a
volcano shortly after eruption. I’m sweating all over. The back of
my head is throbbing from hitting the wall. My eye sight is still unfocused
from being pulled so unexpectedly from my safe, warm, bed. My haven invaded…I
wake up; it’s 3:30 am, another happy memory of my childhood that I have
not yet managed to forget. My heart is beating like a race horses’ and
I’m sweating like in my dream, but this time it’s only my memory…I
can sink back into yet another night of interrupted sleep.
A few hours later I’m awoken by the cock-a-doodle-doo of my alarm clock
and try to put my mind in a happy place. Last night’s memories are still
haunting me in the back of my mind. My day has been ruined, the rest of
the day I’ll feel like a mouse being watched by a longing snake. I’ll
sit in class scheming up ways to save my youngest brother and sister from
living with the memories we older children share. I’ll fantasize for
hours about how my older sisters, two brothers, and I will rescue my younger
sister and brother from the terror we witnessed and the unfortunate circumstances
that shaped our lives. Looking back I see my life has made me stronger
and molded me to who I am, but Josh at seven and Ellyssa at five shouldn’t
need to learn that way. They should be given the chance to flourish painlessly.
When I’m asked what I will do with my life, I think about what I am.
I’m like a simple pebble smoothed by the ocean’s relentless currents
thrown into a collection of larger, rougher, and sharper stones. They’re
all skilled in lessons about life and opportunities I seem to have missed
out on. Now I’m slowly making up for it. Even though I no longer live
with this snake disguised as my mother, I still will forever experience
her undying, insatiable need to hurt and cause pain.
I feel as though I’m looking into a TV, I see what’s hidden in my
darkest, deepest, depths, but this TV seems to have a broken remote. The
channels only change after the passing of each night. Sometimes it’s
as though the cable has been turned off, connection lost and I have peaceful
sleep. But more commonly then not the uncontrollable channels haunt my
dreams, sleepless nights; interrupted by consciousness every hour making
sure my past hasn’t once again become my reality. Instead I find my
past has become some one else’s reality. The reality of two beautiful
children who are defenseless and one of them disabled by Down Syndrome,
which puts her feelings in the open, unable to be protected from anyone.
My little sister Ellyssa with Down Syndrome can’t realize it’s not
her fault; her emotions are looked inside her because she is cut off from
the world by her limited vocabulary. A wall has been inserted into her
life that she can’t take down. But she seems to wait on the other side
for a hero. She waits patiently, seeming only frustrated by her fruitless
attempts to overcome the wall she hasn’t chosen. She seems to wonder
why I can’t help her, why we can’t help her. She seems so frustrated
and even worse; let down. She seems to feel let down because we can’t
understand her. The loneliness she feels is more powerful then any pain
or blow we have yet received. We were physically harmed, wrestled to the
floor, thrown against walls and bounced off like stuffed animals. We were
my mothers’ physical outlets. We confided only in each other throughout
the storms. Ellyssa is not so lucky. She can’t confide in us or even
tell us what she wants; all she has to protect her is our hugs, love, and
tears. These things have become her life lines, her shelter, and her will
to keep going. Her reasons to flash that smile once again. I fear my
thoughts about what she goes through when we can’t be with her, when
she’s left alone with the snake she becomes the mouse--the prey. The
damage being done to her isn’t visible to the untrained eye, those who
don’t know and those who won’t see. She’s become a flower scorched
by the sun, denied rain, and unable to plant strong roots. Her one possible
companion has been handed a better scenario, and her denied it, due to
her disability.
Her brother has been offered a chance to excel, to leave his past early
and avoid seeing into the TV I see every night. But I can only hope he’s
changed his roots early enough and his growth won’t be stunted by his
hard start. We can only hope he’s been protected from the snake.
But my biggest struggle yet, aside from the physical pain, verbal abuse,
and mind games, is yet to come. It’s accepting that I can’t protect
Josh and Ellyssa from my mother’s wrath and unexplainably neurotic actions
that often sting. She’s a seemingly cute snake that suddenly realized
she has teeth. She’s become addicted to that feeling of unsuspecting
flesh of a child’s future, dreams, and mind caught between her gleaming
white teeth. Attacking with potent venom that doesn’t kill, but worse;
leaves the young victim scarred for always. Unable to grasp a normal life,
instead it feathers by and leaves the child in its crowded solitude, and
thunderously silent wake.
Comments on "Reality of Children"
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A former member wrote:
Awesome rough draft, needs some work but it creates great visuals. You are very talented and with a little work you will achieve wonders.
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On Tuesday, January 10, 2006, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
...thanks Adam....it's nice to be able to share this with someone who knows me well.....
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A former member wrote:
Wow..this is one hell of a rough draft little sister = ) Let it all out... A smooth stone in the ocean's relentless currents indeed. Your ability to observe and express is amazing. ~Lost~
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A former member wrote:
WOW!!! i can't write like that. the imagery and all...awesome! and if u ever need anyone to talk to...u can dp-mail me or w/e ^_^
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A former member wrote:
wow.....i know all of this, but every time i read this i still can't believe it.....the horros and trauma you went through....i feel bad but then i realize that if you never experienced it you would never be the kind of person you are today....tears!!!!
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On Friday, October 21, 2005, Adam
(245) wrote:
Crista i cant say any thing to this. i have always looked up to you, one of the reasons is you were able to get through or at least keep pushing on. i could not imagine this and just want you to know if you need someone i'm here...
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On Friday, October 21, 2005, Adam
(245) wrote:
...And what a good rough draft, my final copies aren’t written this well. Your Loving friend, ~Adam
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On Friday, October 21, 2005, Err0r
(365) wrote:
'cock-a-doodle-doo'? Aha. :) That was the best part. This was a strong structured write. I don't see that often. Nice.
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On Friday, October 21, 2005, Err0r
(365) wrote:
Now that I think about it. When I was in school- I wish I wrote rough drafts like that. Mine were always 'it's blue outside. she's cold.' I was so lazy. :D