Log In
Perfection
By vaultgrl
Perfection is impossible,
One more thing above man.
Perfection is impossible,
we will never shake that hand.
This has eluded us,
always shown us down.
For years and years continuous,
we'll never break that ground.
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
vaultgrl
Published on Thursday, October 13, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Awards
Comments on "Perfection"
Log in to post comments.
-
A former member wrote:
Short but sweet. Perfectly imperfect. ;) Love it!
-
On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, Dancing_Monkey
(1246)
wrote:
Alanarchys comment said it all.. *Nods a few times*
-
On Sunday, January 29, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Prophetic. Show's a sense of stark nature and understanding. good one. I'll be watching out for you.
-
On Monday, January 9, 2006, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
very tue
-
A former member wrote:
I know this is out of place here and late on both counts but Happy Birthday, and welcome to DP = ) From what I have read so far your writing is lovely. You have lots of potential. ~Lost~
-
On Wednesday, December 7, 2005, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
...lol, well the birthday thing isn't late...but yea, I've been at dp for sometime now, but still thank you!...
-
On Wednesday, December 14, 2005, Adam
(245) wrote:
just a side note that person came the same timeish as you did crista
-
A former member wrote:
this was really short but bold in its message it didnt hide it at all nice job
-
On Friday, October 14, 2005, Adam
(245) wrote:
This is another nice one crista, this is one of your Lighter ones :) it's good
-
A former member wrote:
Wonderful rhyme scheme. This is, in a sense, described as perfectly as it could be. (and yes, I know, perfection is impossible) nice job. *Evangel*
-
On Thursday, October 13, 2005, Doc
(145) wrote:
how astute. Not terribly optomistic, but solid. I like that. Peace Doc
vaultgrl's Latest Works Feed
Join